You might see that story isn't smooth and so rushed but I've tried my best, will try harder in next one. I'm so confused which category should I upload this on, first time i upload my own work.

dA: https://ouo.io/bc0DpN
pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=3165642

nice work. i see this manga is not from Japan H-mangaka? coz, when googling around, only came up with deviantart artist.

anyway, torrent added! :)

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@JJudgement: Uh, did you draw it or did you translate it? I am confused

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I draw it myself, not translating. Also English isn't my native language, sorry if there's typo.

Btw I'm not japanese, but I'm asian :D

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@JJudgement, so you're saying you that RanneRo? :)

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VN vào ủng hộ phát, 5 sao nhé :))

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Very nice work! Love it! Thanks for sharing it

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@loco00: yeah I am :D I draw alot but most of them themeless so I'm afraid to upload them all on e-hentai.

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@JJudgement. lol. u should upload it. and put it as your artwork gallery. now, u should consider get a tag for your name in artist tag. owh, btw. great work. love it. :3

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This should not have the sister tag, the sister tag is for when a sister has sex with her sibling, the brother only watches in this.

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That brother is really some brick. Sorry... But it made me kind of angry. Even though it is just a story. He should be letting her do whatever she wants. So boring that little guy.

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Pleasant drawing. Good story (although I was hoping that in the end Sei-chan will win the final battle... but this is NTR, and I liked it. I'm just an optimist). Thank you for your hard work.

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@caschque he should have used a brick on that bastard's thigh and gut, toss his ass out the house then make vanilla love to his onee-chan.

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good shit need anal too, maybe a gangbang continuation?

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@hoigoigoi
Nah, he's a sissy. He should be dominated. Bisexual threesome ftw.

Anyway. That was a good.

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The brother should just hire some guys with dicks larger than that guys, then video tape them raping her until she is more cum than woman. That way the other gets ntr'd as well and he makes money off of it.

Last edited on 08 June 2015, 17:54 UTC.

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@JJudgement; Impressive, this is one of the first times I've seen someone upload something of there own on this site that fit the japanese style so perfectly I didn't notice the difference just by looking. Let alone an NTR work, so few outside of japan can do it well without making more like the western cuckold fetish which is a bit different. You may not have so much free time to devote to it, but I really hope to see more like this. And you'll notice that it's hard to post an NTR work, let alone one you claim to have made yourself without a bunch of butthurt NTR-haters showing up to either outright insult both you and your work, or make inane comments about how it should have had a feel good end with the protag beating the guy and stealing the girl back (do they even get the point of NTR to begin with?). Don't pay them any mind.

@Mrsuperhappy; Whether the Sister tag should be there depends on your PoV. Has to be "Any sexual situation between a female and her sibling" so it depends on whether you consider them showing off having sex for the express purpose of making him jealous counts as him being involved in the situation. Isn't voyeurism a sexual act, even if you're only watching and don't get to do anything directly? Does being a witness to exhibitionism not make you a part of the sexual act, willing or not?
The fact that he is jealous and the sister actually describes it as cheating on him, showing that she understands his desire for her even as she betrays him, makes him a part of it. Just not a happy part of it.

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Oh, you have good art. You make the girl look sexy, and the sex pretty hot. Also, if you ever decide to make another manga and post it here again, try to do it under the "Doujinshi" category, as you have published it yourself (If you're Asian and live in Asia it counts, but I think if you live outside Asia it may be considered "Western". Dunno).

About the story. If had potential to be a decent NTR one, but in this manga the problem lies with the relationship of the sister and brother. It didn't feel like they had a close enough relationship, a sexual or romantic one, specifically, to justify the feeling of Yuuki being "stolen" from Sei. Hell, it doesn't feel like they have ever had a relationship other than an average siblings type, between a brother and sister.
If you plan to write up another NTR story, and are going for the "stealing" type, then you might want to make sure to set up a proper relationship with the male "victim" and the heroine getting NTR'd.

Other than that, good job. Also, please consider adding some stockings fetish in the future! Girls with thigh highs are always sexy ;)

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@TheDiabolical, I did consider that, but sister requires the incest tag and the incest tag requires sex, so sister requires sex.

http://shink.me/RyEZI - Note: Requires the incest tag.
http://www.fapoff.com/BhvLm -Description: Sex between family relatives, even those not related by blood.

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Technically, it's a doujin but not really one since it didn't come from a circle and it's not really from a japanese author. Also for it to be labeled a manga, doesn't it have to be serialized in a magazine? Best category you can put this in is western, or doujinshi; I'd say western though.

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The real sicko here is the brother; instead of being happy that his sister found someone she loves, he wants to fuck her himself. What a sicko.

Half-joking aside though, this is amazing stuff.

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Definitely you should submit your other draws, even if doens't have history (there's a lot if japanese/western artist galleries with non history), with this work as presentation card no one is gonna say anything against your hentai skills man. Definitely the artist tag "rannero" must be added to the galleries. Can't wait for the sequel and thanks for sharing it here. Follwing you on DA, pixiv, imgur and now here.

(I guess adding the Tg series as prologue could make this Hentai work way more in the NTR part, 'cause not all here know the background of each character and how close Sei chan was to Yuuki)

Last edited on 09 June 2015, 01:32 UTC.

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I'm a sucker for gender bender stuff, and your art is great, especially for an amateur.

Keep up the good work!

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Omg I wish I could draw as good as you, I have this Idea for the mother of all ntr that I would love to be able to get on paper. It would be the most rage inducing ntr anyone could ever come up with and it would have a believable storyline and pacing.

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@shamful7: Really? Tell me more, I want to hear it. Contact me through ranne.ro@gmail.com or message via EH forum.

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just draw more, the more you draw, the better it will be, you know xter, he/she is a thai artist, and his/her work is good :)

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This is actually pretty nice. will be following you from now on.

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Jesus christ he needs to play mortal kombat more.

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thanks for the upload man, the art is pretty freaking nice. The english is ok, it got the point across which is all that is really needed.

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damn ranero.. i am impressed...

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@JJudgement: I'm impressed, your drawing is good. I'm gonna follow you from now on XD
Also this one makes me got a boner lol

Keep up the good work, man =w=)b

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