Original RAW at
http://g.e-hentai/g/648438/88603b326f/

Base +9, Anime Janai +10, skeith123 +8, blagblag +7

i appreciate the effort but i have never seen a worse typesetting job in my life

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@ Exsteverbur Not only that, but this cenosrship is unreal. If Japanese artists contine to let thier government mutilate their work, then i'm moving to hentai foundary.

Base +6, yellow-chan +5, skeith123 +8, erious -6, Blazephlozard +7, Nemesis2000 +5, The Inker -7, Franka -9, marched +5, TheLordOmega +6

The words of the prophets are not written on these walls.

Base +7, Anime Janai +10, MrJrai +8, skeith123 +8

Cute idea, even if the characters are in quite an odd position, but one without the goofy censorship would be a treat.

Base +6, erious -6

Even with this typeset, I really want to see the second part of the story translated.

Base +6, Romzar +8, Dragshadow +6, skeith123 +8, alschneev +5, put1996 +6, destructorspace +23, affles +10, alixraen +5, Revy28 +6, catki14 +6, Kainthedamned +12, jubjubman8 +6, and 22 more...

I appreciate your effort

Base +2

Man the censorship here is unreal. If the artists dont stand for their rights their craft will be destroyed.

Base +9, skeith123 +8, erious -6, Blazephlozard +7, Nemesis2000 +5, Kristoph Gavin +6, surted +14, AlexUnknown +6, exia45 +6, HelmutRegner -5, Sturmjager +9, kozmyn +6, Denys-kun +6, and 9 more...

So Itou Akari can see Hattori Hiromi's well devolved vagina, but she can't see through the glass because it's a one way mirror? How does that work?

Base +6, MrPhil +5, Nemesis2000 +5, jonnieD +5, ihavenoname5757 +9, Denys-kun +6, UnknowDestroyer +6, Yuneday +4, koji8123 +5

its closing next month?

WHAT THE FUCK????? WHY?!?!?!

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http://imgur.com/npyaD4Z

This is how you do typesetting, YOU BITCH (read in Nama-sensei's voice)

PM me if you guys want me to do the rest. I sure would like to, and I probably will end up doing it.

Update: Imagining people's confusion when they see my redone typesetting and read comments about how horrible it is is an unforeseen yet hilarious side bonus.

Base +6, Nemesis2000 +5, getalife +2, oneiwonder +5, errata +6, hjhj210 +10, Bullettime +6, Denys-kun +6

typesetting aside, when i saw the thumbnail for 1st page i thought it's their butt poking out of the glory hole; my head goes 'wtf? how the hell did they turn their lower body 180 degrees around? is this supposed to be a gore doujin?' LOL

*updated*
well, now that soothed my eyes.

Base +4, oneiwonder +5

Meh. This can't be a japanese sex museum. Whare are the 10 years loli genitals? And the futa? And the scat/guro/bondage exhibitions?

(The censorship is bad, but the typesetting is even worse.)

EDIT: truth hurts, huh :P

Base +16, Nemesis2000 +5, Stedman75 -8, jonnieD +5, magico alverman -7, Kuro Neko -28, UnknowDestroyer -6

Erotic Museum?
More like STD Spreading Center, am I rite guise?

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OBJECTION!
On page 8 we get informed that the inside of the box is a mirror, so the girls do not see out of the box.
On page 6, the youngest girl is commenting about the look of the oldest girl's vagina while looking at it.
THIS IS A CLEAR CONTRADICTION.

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Very nice. I don't mind the typesetting at all.

Base +6

Good job. I want more :P

Base +1

Oh no, don't shut down the sex museum. As the spunky, young, energetic hero, I'll take it upon myself to make sure girls and boys of all ages can have this proud job.

Fucking what? I love these public sex ideas where everyone is really proud of this. Its helarious.

Base +2

need more public sex workers

Base +5

Looking forward for the second one get translated!

Base +10, Nemesis2000 +5

Wow, this is much better! Please translate more soon! :D

Base +5, Busz_Men +6

This would have been much better uncensored and put a anal and vaginal camera in his work!!

Base +2, Kuro Neko -28

@Azure Flash

I'd love to see the rest and btw.. It's time to take A SHOT! lol xD

Base +7

If I am gathering right from the rest of the chapters, the characters here are actually just mannequins modeled after people living in the city... which actually makes this worse, as it subverts the entire whimsical premise and turns it into a bleaker, more surreal story.

Base +5

Why are we not funding this?

Base +7

OMG! An apparent logical error! I must quickly point it out and prove my intelligence!

Come on, this isn't a Sherlock Holmes mystery.
The youngest girl could easily have seen the oldest girl's vagina before. In the museum's changing room, for example, or when they're getting into the exhibit box. There's nothing strange about Akari looking in the direction of the oldest girl's vagina and making a comment about it based on her prior observation of it. Even taking into consideration Part 2, there are still plenty of possible explanations without having to consider X-ray vision.

Base +10