My first creation

transformed to a girl so to be able to play with one?
Somehow I can see what kind of plot this story is leading to.

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Wait wait wait wait... what the hell happened to Kara? did he kill her to take her appearence or something?

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Off to a great start, looking forward to the rest of the story! Thank you for sharing it with us!

Edit: Awesome first chapter! I can see that he's going to have a lot of fun with that phone now that he's the only one with those memories!

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Rinko and Manaka

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Why did become Death Note all of a sudden?

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lol it reminds me death note

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Many thanks for your support and comments!

@hideygtr: am using "Digital Mate" for the graphic part and a software called "Comic life" to put everything in place!
@b911: Thks for your feedback, really appreciated. Sorry for my english... I wrote my stories in English so that most of the poeple could read it... It would be easier and probably more "realistic" in my native language.

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Loving it.
Keep up the good work!

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What program do you used to create the history?

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want to turn into a girl after taking there picture? well there's an app for that!

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Absolutely love the direction this seems to be heading (as of page 12)

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I love it, keep up, i check daily, so I'm not gonna miss any updates

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I would like to see him being forced by another boy while he is in the form of a women that would be very funny
Or One of the girls(Fujoshi) have the same phone and rape him with a copy of any male body

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Page 20: S/he should try it before knocking it!

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What's with Mind Control stories where the main character is a careless moron? It's so distracting...

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When is there gonna be another update?

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i hope there will be a second chapter

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I think......3 in 1......

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As much as I dislike even the imagination of rape, this comic is kinda hot. :3

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Wow, he totally just MIB'd that ending. I can see chapter 2 now...

K[ara]: Did you ever flashy-thing me?
S[am]: No.
K[ara]: I ain't playing with you, S. Did you ever flashy-thing me?
S[am]: No.

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You should really keep the tag timestop or petrification on here, since your story features a girl being completely frozen in place and played with. There are no other tags to define that, so it falls under the catchall umbrella of those two.

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You put good effort into this work, and I enjoyed reading it. The main criticism I have is that the broken English and unnatural sentences really kill the mood and disrupt the flow of the events. Other than that, you did a pretty great job with this first chapter.

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are these stock characters or did you make them?

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I've uploaded a torrent for the complete set. Enjoy.

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Whatt...usually it is the other way around, but it seems as that everybody wants to be Kara, and become the opposite gender...

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