Posted on 24 August 2013, 13:59 UTC by
Trips
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I really doubt it will end as "good" as his previous work. I can deal with slut being taken away by "bullies" but please leave fat one sad and alone. He is really pissing me off.
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So already there is a chapter 3 huh? & the corruption seems going very well, great I love the style of this author to develop the NTR, pérsonally I'm still awaiting some kind of sequel of the last UnSweet where the same guy as the last time is again the victim of NTR but now with his new girlfriend.
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Posted on 09 January 2014, 20:58 UTC by
Crystalium
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...I don't even know why I'm reading this. Even if I ignore the fact that I hate NTR (especially this one, since it was a bait-and-switch from the beginning), the characters don't make any sense.
Summary Chapter 4: They get seen fucking her (this is on purpose by the fat guy). Guy asks what's happening and gets restrained. Then as according to some surprisingly detailed prepared lines by Futoshi, Hiyori throughtout the whole chapter is made to say and do things under threat of the pictures that were taken of her being exposed, as well as her (previous) relationship with her brother (she actually seems to be think more in terms of her brother getting hurt than herself). So even though she says things like "I dating fat-fuck", "I want your cum (to blondie)", "I love you dick (to blondie), "Yuzuru, I'm taking his cum in my mouth", etc and follows anything fat-fuck says, like taking a dog-like stance , in her mind she is saying to herself that "I love Yuzuru", "Yuzuru, don't look at me", "Futoshi, why are you making me do this? Especially in front of Yuzuru", "Nooo, that's not how I really feel" {paraphrase} etc (except for momentary lapses (If I can call them "lapses) in which she actually want a guy's/their dick(s), like when they brought her to the brink of cumming and they stopped, wanting her to beg). At the "end" of the session, she grabs Yuzuru's leg and thinks "Yuzuru, save me!", and as expected as a NTRed protagonist, he leaves her to the dogs, even after when her hears her called out his name out loud.........I hate NTR. I am stupid for reading this.
@Lalilulelo04
Page 109 NTRed brother walks in, sees her, says "What's with that appearance?", notices chest writing which literally says "I'm Futoshi's thing" (meaning "I'm Futoshi's property, aka "I'm a retarded slut girl with no strength of character belonging to a retarded fat fuck of a slug with no moral backbone") and thinks "That's there for me? (meaning: "That's put there as a message to me?)
Page 110
She realizes he is reading her chest, covers it, he walks away, she says "w-wait", guy says "...what is this?", notices the sheets, says "Seriously...you did it with Futoshi in my room?
Page 111
Says "Fuck you/this", she says "Sorry, Yuzuru...I've always, always, been sorry", "Ever since that day, your onee-chan already...", "I thought that no matter what happened, it would be fine", "I had to let Futoshi-kun [and she still fucking uses the "kun" honorific...I can't fucking believe it] see everything", "Onee-chan's body already couldn't go against him"
Page 112
~Some fucking stuff about their childhood and words left unsaid~, "That's what Yuzu already doesn't need Onee-chan anymore", "Even though I love you, I...betrayed Yuzu and hurt you a lot/many times. I'm sorry"
Page 113
The box says "So, she's crying...", He says "That's enough", "Futoshi does it well {I am not 100% on this part}" while thinking to himself "Shit, that's not what I truly wanted to say", she says "Yes, I understand {see, I think I messed up the previous part}", he leaves her, she cries.
Page 114
The fat-fuck apparently sent a message to ??? number of people that contained the following, which I will paraphrase: "The girl in this picture is my girlfriend and Student Council President. Her name is Hiyori. Even though she is my girlfriend, she continues to have sexual affairs with other men. She needs some punishment/scolding. That's why, please come to my girlfriend's house (located at the following address) and lets have sex with her together. Everyone, tonight, please fuck/rape her!" (as I said this is a paraphrase...it still makes no fucking sense to say "I'm her boyfriend, please rape her"). He also tells her that {paraphrase} "{some stuff}...you've betrayed him again. That's way/so you see, you've already given up"
{I might, but probably won't, add in the part about their childhood later.}
@ Lalilulelo04 "but is she regretting everything she's doing or has she completely fallen ? (cause she was thinking about her bro while fucking)"
So far, she does regret everything that has happened [SIDETRACK START which I can't even take seriously. The way she got involved in this by the fat guy is so fucking retarded. He's a bad guy! The only way he won't kill himself is to have sex with you, leave him! Don't demean yourself like that... but of course, this is NTR. Low logic is to be expected. SIDETRACK END]
She is not completey fallen. She had, however, several occasions given up to pleasure (She occasionally refers to it as "Even though I love Yuzuru, my body can't go against Futoshi-kun", as they have sex. She almost 100% of the time phrases it as her body, not her mind, that is taken...as if that fucking means anything). So she still has some "sanity", but she gives it up a lot "in the moment", most notable on page 107 and 108, which I will paraphrase
Page 107
Fat-fuck says, "I'll get you pregnant with my child" "But if you do get pregnant, we'll get it immediately aborted" [...what the fuck?] She replies "You're terrible" with a fucked-silly face. He asks "Answer me!" She says "I understand [aka "Yes"]" He says "Because of me, you're moving your hips! Do you want to get pregnant so badly?" She makes pleasured moans and then says "[Pleasured moan that might be a corrupted version of "Yes" ("Hahi" as opposed to "Hai"] Inside! I want Futoshi-kun's seed inside my womb!"
That was the speech bubbles paraphrased. The thought boxes say "Even though I love Yuzuru...my body already can't fight it/fat-fuck...ah, I see...I...already...my body has fallen for Futoshi"...and this is followed by
Page 108
{Parapharse} "Ahhhhhh!! Hiyori is Futoshi-kun's property! I'm Futoshi-kun's eternal meat doll [that's literal, I guess "fuck-toy" is a naturalized translation]!!...Ooooh! Your sperm is coming! Futoshi's seed is spurting out soo happily into my womb!!........It's so good...my asshole...my pussy....more" while thinking "Your Onee-chan is already no good/broken"
...which is then followed by the above parts
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By the way, I only provided translations or paraphases of the translation just to show how retarded the character/plot are [or to give some of you a little hope that she is not totally NTRed, which, if I look at the author, is likely going to be crushed in the next chapter(s) unfortunately]. As I said, I absolutely despise NTR, especially bait-and-switch ones.
Is it bad if my post is too long?
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Posted on 09 January 2014, 17:52 UTC by
EdoubleT
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pg 94 ....a wild hero appears
EDIT 9-1-2014
@Crystalium thanks for the translation
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Posted on 29 October 2013, 05:10 UTC by
redbone
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I know its not gonna happen but after what fatass has done I'd love to see some justice done here....
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Posted on 29 October 2013, 05:12 UTC by
linkCS
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Even if it can't end with them together... For fucks sake man, it's your fucking sister. PROTECT HER FROM THESE SHIT HEADS.
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Feel bad for the brother, no way he's coming out of this one in one piece. Hopefully he can retain his dignity like the last protagonist did.
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Posted on 29 October 2013, 13:35 UTC by
bakasora
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rage fapping, feels so good
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Posted on 29 October 2013, 06:01 UTC by
nimea
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so stupid girl
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I'd say there's a sliver of hope for chapter five, considering there will *be* a chapter five.
Chapter four's already hit the logical stopping point for an NTR story. Main guy has seen how his lover has been broken and is devastated by it.
There's not really a full chapter of NTR stuff left to do, and the last panel is of a guy we haven't seen before who it looks like the hero is talking to about the whole situation, and who is just as distressed by it as the hero.
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Posted on 30 October 2013, 02:41 UTC by
Wilfriback
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@EdoubleT
Maybe but, what if the guy gets the slut away from the rapists only to keep her to himself? Not like the brother did anything except complain...
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i Dont really care about anybody else but the fatass must pay
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aw ... had seen this happen ......
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Posted on 10 January 2014, 20:41 UTC by
Chadmart
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@Crystalium
Thanks for the translation. I've really got to stop reading NTR, it's fucking depressing.
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Posted on 16 November 2013, 18:50 UTC by
Roxas108
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Entonces esta es la continuacion de ane sweet? diganme que no qe solo se parece porfa
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This was amazing as always.
Thank you for the upload!
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Posted on 04 February 2014, 18:21 UTC by
ayami123
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oh here it is the prequel hahaha
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Posted on 29 October 2013, 14:40 UTC by
badmana
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Who is that on the last panel? Did the fat one lose weight?
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It is So damn ugly...from her why would she want to still save him after what he did to her? and the brother just stands there i would have beathen the hell out of the sacks of the guys and taken her even if she would say "hey i like their dicks now..." And i would fuck the shit out of her for days straight and at some point he knows her pleasure points and movements too, but NO he just stands there and does nothing...
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Posted on 24 August 2013, 08:49 UTC by
An_chan
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The first two chapters were way more entertaining. Chp 3 would be much better if she was harder to break (that's the best part of all netorare manga, right?). Hmm, the art looked a bit better in the previous chapters as well, she was so cute in the 1st chap. :|
Chapter 3: 2.5/5
Overall rating: 3.5/5
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Posted on 30 October 2013, 06:47 UTC by
xtmm
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mierda, la infidelidad o el ntr ntre hermanos es lo unico en el que no es de mi agrado, preferiria que fuera con otra relacion, con lo bonito que es el incest,pero en fin a tanaka aji no se le puede reprochar, haber si alguien la rescata,porque su puto brother no lo va a hacer SORPRENDENDEME AJI-SENSEI XD
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Posted on 08 January 2014, 23:34 UTC by
monkeyneth
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The brother looks the same as the guy in the older unsweet stories, the guy that stole other girls from guys.
Maybe he went evil after this happend :(
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Posted on 12 January 2014, 15:59 UTC by
Zaiup
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No importa si termina mal, solo quiero que el gordo de mierda se muera....
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wow could someone please explaine what the bro-sis are talking about in chapter 5 ?
and what the fatty is saying to the sis when showing the pic.
i would be really gratefull for i don't expect this to be translated after a long time.
@ Crystalium thanks for the explanation man i apreciate it.
edit 1 : but is she regretting everything she's doing or has she completely fallen?(cause she was thinking about her bro while
fucking)
edit 2 : well we're off to bad end then.
@ Crystalium your post isn't too long even more so as it is to explain and translate. Thanks again
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I "read" this since the three-chapter translation felt so incomplete, but even though I can't understand the original language the fourth chapter took me on a ride. It's remarkable how much of the story still came around even though I only saw the pictures, just because I knew the genre. If anything, the impact got stronger, because I could concentrate on the expressions and think about the social setup - and how it really leaves no way out, how it forces the "protagonist" (the brother) into silence because he could not turn the situation around at the crucial junction when he catches the blackmailing gang in the act.
Though simple, this is a really good work, and though the damaged parties (both the brother and the sister, belive it or not) have my sympathy (in principle^^), I can hardly wait for the remaining chapters to be translated.
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