Translation (Pilfered from): 918
Re-edited by (the Pilferer): Afro Thunda
Translation Check: Biribiri (https://ouo.io/lnCkZnj)

A simple re-edit I decided to do since I wasn't pleased with the first version released before. Well, it was supposed to be simple until I questioned the translation. Enter Biribiri. After getting a second opinion, we suspect the first version was a machine translation (if not, forgive us). So, instead of him TL checking this, it's much closer to a re-translation. I still credited 918 as the translator though.

In any case, for those who prefer it, here's a DL Link:
https://ouo.io/3o0wf

Outstanding. Time to celebrate.

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DL Link for those who look past the description:

https://ouo.io/gxicYL

@loressan
First, I don't know how much you put into the bounty, nor was I aware that there ever was a bounty for this. Anyway, it was completed by the other guy, so you got what you wanted, and you gave the guy his just dues by accepting the bounty, so why are you mad? Like I said, I decided to re-edit this after seeing the first version and being none too pleased with the way it looked, but got a near re-translation instead after asking about for a second opinion. That isn't my fault. To make yourself happier, consider this a freebie. For what it's worth to you, that is...

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It's amazing how different the story reads just comparing the first page.

Base +9, Uchiha Madara 5 +16, observer1980 +15, Palaxius +12, Neopheonix0 +6

End result was a proper translation for it, was it not? Why would you be pissed?

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