Original translated script from: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2536140/bfc632e33c/
Original decensored images from: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1197906/e36419dde6/

I've always thought this CG set is hot as fuck. Thanks, original Witch Hat group, you guys were a bunch of marvelous perverts. Unfortunately, the old English translation is in a rough looking state with ugly typesetting and copy errors throughout. Also, whether by intent or by accident, the images used in that version contain horizontal splits along the image, sometimes are the censored version and sometimes are not, and occasionally the images seem to zoom in and out between pages.

So I wanted to update this masterpiece.

I edited and refined all of the text to give it a cleaner appearance. A lot of the dialogue (particularly "ALL HAIL THE ETERNAL PLEASURE") always seemed kinda corny in a "cheap sci-fi B movie" type way, so I didn't feel the need to change it as I felt it suited the story, even if it doesn't sound 100% like natural English.

I used all of the high quality decensored images from user Mags_ 2018 March upload.

This is my first and probably last time ever typesetting an H doujin. This shit took me forever lol.

The clothes thing is a little strange, everything else is great. I hope they are wearing their favorite clothes because I guess it merges to your body and means you have to live the rest of your life wearing them. Man, that would suck getting infected on the way to the gym and you have to wear your workout clothes forever.

Last edited on 10 October 2024, 17:46.

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