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I don't care much about blowjobs, but Fetio's are GOD tier.

I've been waiting for this one to be translated, thank you!

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I fucking love incest bros

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Tagging rough tl:

04
OG:...ああ、やはり朝のふんどし姿での鍛錬は気が引き締まるな
TL:...Yeah, nothing quite like training wearing just a loincloth in the morning.
ED:気が引き締まる meaning focusing, bracing oneself.

05
OG:朝から庭でふんどし姿で謎のトレーニングをするほどの変人っぷりだ。正直一緒にいて疲れてる時もある
TL:It's weird that she does some sort of mysterious training in the morning wearing only a loincloth.
ED:Missing 庭で. Missing をするほどの. Missing 正直一緒にいて疲れてる時もある

05
OG:だが、決して悪い人じゃないしなんだかんだで俺はそんなねーちゃんが大好きだ
TL:But she's not a bad person at all, and that's why I love her.
ED:Missing なんだかんだで

05
OG:鍛錬中に何度も話しかけるな！
TL:Don't talk to me while I'm training!
ED:Missing 何度も. Not the first time she's warned him.

06
OG:ねーちゃんは、めっちゃ気軽に抜いてくれるのだ♡
TL:Nee-chan will agree to anything!♡
ED:This line is way more specific about the things she'd do for him.

06
OG:...ただ、もう少し頻度をおさえられないのか？昨晩も死ぬほどぬいたぞ
TL:...But, would you mind trying to hold back a bit more often? It was tiring yesterday night.
ED:Being tired is an understatement for 死ぬほど.

08
OG:そのまま先っぽ攻め続けてっ
TL:If you keep doing the tip like that...
ED:This is an order.

11
OG:じゃあその前に汗臭いおっぱい吸わせて...
TL:In that case, let me lick the sweat off your tits.
ED:Missing 汗臭い, specifically the 臭い part.

15
OG:ねーちゃんもどう？セックス気持ちい？
TL:How is it, nee-chan? Do you like sex?
ED:He's asking her if she's feeling good lol. Do you like sex sounds kinda off. Missing the nuance of も connecting to the previous bubble.

17
OG:あーイクイクっねーちゃんの生殖器でイクっ
TL:Ahh, cumming, cumming, cumming raw inside nee-chan!
ED:生殖器 is a word. Also he's cumming WITH her 生殖器.

19
OG:中出しされてケツ震えてんのエロ過ぎ♡
TL:Shaking your ass after getting creampied is so sexy.♡
ED:震えて is more like an involuntary action in this case. Twitching, trembling would be a better tl instead of shaking. Also エロ過ぎ would be something closer to incredibly sexy, absurdly sexy, etc.

19
OG:まったくっ今度は私が責め立てやるっ
TL:Seriously, I'll take responsibility this time.
ED:Wrong TL. You mixed it up with 責任を取る

21
OG:き、亀頭やばっ
TL:J-Just the tip...!
ED:Wrong TL.

21
OG:...ね、ねえちゃんこのままシックスナインの体制なってもらっていい...?
TL:N-Nee-chan, can you get in position for 69...?
ED:Missing このまま

23
OG:...おい、咽せるくらいなら嗅ぐな！！
TL:...Oi, if it makes you choke then don't sniff it!
ED:くらい missing.

24
OG:...ちんぽ気持ち過ぎ
TL:This is great.
ED:Talking about his dick.

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Good shit, but sometimes I feel like artists don't really think things through when they storyboard... 69 after creampie? Feels unintentional.

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Needs an oyakodon sequel.

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@cybeast93 Fair, though some of those were deliberate, I started writing the script trying to get just the essentials since I didn't want to push the bubble space, (EX: TL:Don't talk to me while I'm training! / TL: ...But, would you mind trying"), and others were just me thinking it'd be more... normal? in a way, that both of them wouldn't be nutcases so I tried to tone it down somewhat, I think it was around the piss drinking part that my brain gave up on trying.

I'll probably have a revised version later this week, this was supposed to be posted on friday but sickness postponed it.

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An amazing work going into my favorites as a classic to go back to, but should’ve had the mom get in on it too. Hopefully for the sequel!

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