This doujin was published as part of the Translation Update of the week of the 16th.
Translator: grosso
Editor: hourglass

Doujins.com link:https://elii.cc/dksmu

Better PNG Compression + Title Fix

Something feels... off about this translation? Kinda stilted, feels like some other words or different sentence structures could have been used in places? Or am I just retarded?

Base +7, Clamstatic +6, wtfidonteven -6, saturnine +7

Isekai as a genre is never beating the allegations of being shitty.

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I mean there's good elements here, the style is pretty good, preggo Fern and Frieren are super hot, and the mind control could be interesting!!!

It's just a shame that the premise is so meh "old dude just drops by and seggs with Frieren and Fern". Absolutely 0 effort in what's happening (doesn't deserve to call it plot or story here).

A bit sad because it's really what's missing.

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When even the title is not translated correctly you really have to wonder about the quality of the rest of the TL.

Edit: title was edited after I posted this but it's still not correct.

Last edited on 24 March 2024, 00:06.

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Why so many frieren doujins are missing the lolicon tag? It's fucking annoying

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Aura... be relegated to a back page gag.

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@Cunny69

i guess short people count as lolicons huh?

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