Your story is quite promising but the way you talk about the MC in chapter 1 it's a bit long. Make the reader feel boring and don't know what you want to talk about the story. Your art very potential, hope you can improve in the future

Base +6, Mad-Kruger -6, wjj12138 +6, Trav7 -4, DasNiveau +6

What a wonderful story! Maybe you can put this chapter in Deviantart where we can communicate about you and your work and not just comment^_^!

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Hello, thanks for the criticism and advice, that helps me to try to improve, I already have a page on DevianArt in case you want to follow me:

https://ouo.io/VNs7qP

In my Patreon I will be uploading the chapters in advance, I leave them in case you want to take a look:

https://elii.cc/0iri

All opinions are always welcome :)

Base +1, fag1234 +6, Lahha +6, kellim +6

When will the rest come out?

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艸 草 Www

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I can't believe I read 237 pages and didn't even get to see him get railed by cock yet smh

Base +6, mdk101 +6, bipo8 -4

237 pages of nothing, absolute nothing, if this gets updated in the future with you know AN ACTUAL STORY skip ahead of page 237, you pretty much won't miss anything

Base +6, *Blackshard* +10, Afganitia +5, eskhahe +6, zykyne +6

Loved the tricky part at the end!

Base +4, Ciano21 +4

Loved it so far! can't wait to see the rest!

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Can you upload the man of the house part 3

Base +1, akkks -6

I like the story so far, with it's potential for crazy situations. With the long introduction changes and influence of circumstances are much more apparent.
By the way, if somebody cried for some time, their voice will sound husky like they had a cold. It quickly goes away, but in confrontation with PE teacher it would also work for interpretation. It sort of tipped the following official excuse.

Last edited on 02 September 2022, 20:41.

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A mega Chapter, Thank You. This story is becoming really interesting, Well Done.

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Part 5 can you upload now

Base +2, qqkk077 +6

草，怎么突然有中文消防栓

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Loving it. Keep up the good work.

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:O what is this

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shittons of filler, but the parts that are good are good.

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Literally 1000 pages in now and he finally gets his first kiss so I guess we're on track for him to suck his first cock by page 3500 and finally get fucked at page 6000.

Base +6, wertzu2112 +6, PregnantWhoreFucker +6, qqkk077 +6

Unfortunately it's just the quality of 90's polygons.

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why is there always a triangle on the nose？

Base +6, Ciano21 +4

people pretty mad at this but I don't really mind the slow pace and many pages so long as it's not a bunch of filler frames showing useless movement.

Base +8, carjua +7, worldstoned +6, Gynem +6

To enjoy more of this story up to the end of Chapter 12 go here: https://clk.sh/ZeHk

Base +4, fire2244 -4, carjua +7, b@ity -9, Soliol -6

love ya! @monOINKa

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什么时候完全变成女性？

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