Hello kaya-nee fans!

this is the first h-manga i translated just because i
was bored and i like reading this series.

i hope we get a continuation and more kaya-nee stories.

your feedbacks will be appreciated. i would like to improve my translation skills and try do more work in the future!

If you hate ntr/cheating, just avoid this one. lol

- hotdogman

Classic Kaya-nee

edit: Dude, you should add author name on the title.

Base +9

You got the bitch's name wrong and it's spelled out in plain furigana on page 1.

Add to that:

>wrong 1280x downsized resolution
>text is left-aligned
>Manga Temple as the font

Checking all the boxes, eh?

rough grammar

p.1 I hated myself so much I don't have > tenses?
p.4 schoo
p.6 docile > not the word you're looking for in this context
p.15 this lewd tits > these

General: https://ouo.io/uczXCD
Typesetting: https://www.rqq.co/BhvPE
Redrawing: https://elii.cc/sofe

Base +22, dankestdungeon +24, Mingosei +7, taretare -6, Spooky Ghost Butts +8, TheGoodGiggle +12, slapforce +6, DogbertLinc +6

ASO! OR EVEN ASOU! NOT A ASAGAYA! KAYA ASOU!
But translation is pretty good. Nice!

Last edited on 04 April 2023, 16:01.

Base +7, TheGoodGiggle +12, Tyflosion18 +6

can you tranlsate the milf work too ? http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2288248/d777c776cc/

Base +10, punkex +8