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p.1 she always make - makes

rough translation (just to flag that some of your lines are so poorly translated they actually mean the opposite of what they should)

Page 1
Your TL: She's currently living in my home
JP: 居候
Intent: Means she's a freeloader. Pretty big omission considering this is the core aspect of the story.

Page 1
Your TL: So she always make food "only" that are better than usual
JP: いつもご飯”だけ”はお店以上のものを用意してくれる
Intent: Besides the extremely confusing grammar, he's referring to food made at the store/restaurant.

Page 2
Your TL: She uses none of my money
JP: ずっと家にいるのにお金も払わないし
Intent: She doesn't contribute any money/help pay rent. She's a freeloader, remember?

Page 2
Your TL: And does all the chores for me
JP: 家事も全くしてくれないうえに
Intent: She DOESN'T do any chores. Or much of anything besides make dinner.

Page 2
Your TL: But she was forced out due to her rent
JP: 家賃が払えぜ追い出されたらしく
Intent: The way you phrased this is really vague when the JP is really clear: Seems like she was evicted because she didn't pay rent.

Page 4
Your TL: I've been waiting for you in this fashion
JP: 恰好
Intent: Idk maybe it's the poor English, but this refers to how she's dressed up trying to seduce him (I'm sure you'll notice the giant shot of her ass hanging out in panties.) "In this fashion" usually means "in the manner of" and refers more to a way of doing than actual fashion.

Page 5
Your TL: I'd have resisted already // but when I think about her feelings
JP: 本当なら抵抗してやめさせるべきだと思うが // 拠り所のない彼女の心情を考えると
Intent: Lots of omissions. To be honest/normally, I should resist her advances // but when I think about how [her feelings of] she has nobody else to rely on, I can't...

Page 8
Your TL: She's teasing me!
JP: 弄り方がえぐすぎるっ！
Intent: Omissions. "She's really going overboard with the teasing!" (more lit: The way she's teasing me is way too much!")

Page 8
Your TL: Cute
JP: 反応かわ～
Intent: The problem is that this is too vague. What's cute? His dick? Him? His reactions? In JP, it's specifically his reactions.

Page 12
Your TL: That's a lot for someone tired
JP: 渋ってたわりに
Intent: She's not referring to his tiredness, but his will. "Pretty big load for someone who's [acting like he's] not into it/so unwilling."

Page 15
Your TL: her hips
JP: この腰使いっ
Intent: The way she moves her hips

Last edited on 31 March 2023, 20:29.

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This body type along with this gentler level of femdom is godly
Hope someone uploads a better translation

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