I've said it before, and I'll say it again: this is trash. If you can't tell a decent comic story - of any genre - in 50 pages, then you need to transition to writing books.

Because even setting aside the fact that this is a nearly sexless *fetish comic,* it remains a directionless, plodding, plotless nightmare. I mean, FFS, why is the heroine such an unlikable and on-the-nose self-insert?

Imagine all the 20-25 page satisfying porn comics this guy could have churned out over the last two years. Then look at this monstrosity. SMH.

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this is by far one of the worst things i've ever read. didn't even get a half-chub. flaccid through and through. in fact, i think my penis actually got smaller while reading this. can't even read it for the plot because its so dogshit. but not the funny dogshit where it's ironically bad, it's just unreadable.

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