Despite having some of the best art of Belldandy, JoyDivision has some of the most terrible content when it comes to their scripts (text). I can buy that there is scat (which is thankfully not always depicted in the artwork itself), which is fine I guess... but I have noticed in the two I am currently translating (and probably in the already translated ones), that there are many incidents with violence, especially child abortion, and Belldandy talks about it in a happy tone.
Thankfully, only one page in this set contains any of that, and while I did feel somewhat squeamish translating it, I still kept it in, while I created a more, 'down to earth', version for us dweebs out there.
===== Notes ===== I have already noticed the typo on page 9 (missing -y in many). Will update soon, but not right now in case I have missed other typos/grammatical errors.
Any grammatical corrections are welcome
===== Updates ===== Update 1: Typo fixed in page 9
===== User comments ===== @suratkabar: Perhaps, but I would prefer it to stay on her own being, as I take it that she can heal without any issue. Involving the fetus just feels... wrong, and I say that as someone who goes around and translate monster and bestiality rape doujins XD
@raemew: I'm thinking of doing some more, but not sure if I'll do all the missing ones.
@tomgonzo34: I actually started on the White Album, but since it has more text, it'll need a little more time to be QC'd
holy shit JD translation after so fucking long, I think it's safe to say that some of us coomer's first few favorite artists is this guy lmao. "there are many incidents with violence, especially child abortion, and Belldandy talks about it in a happy tone." - that's like the point though, right? to show how deviant(?) she is.