For some reason, my new editing software does not show Chinese characters properly, so the chinese version will be delayed.

I try something like central alignment and grammatical accuracy, and let's see if this one will satisfy you horndogs or not.

I have some final projects in school to finish, so my uploading here will be slow for a couple weeks!

Bad news! This editor just cannot deal with Chinese texts well, so I have to use the previous editor with lesser functions of typesetting for my works in future, or else I won't be able to process two version simultaneously.

P.1 title fixed

@bigbro000
There was a guy showing me some translation editing guide, and one of the notes said something like unique fonts for main characters and stuff, so I tried
and I only spent about 5 to 10 min doing this before sleep, so don't rush me, pal!

@HorseMan00
I know, my English learning is largely associated with my medical education, and that's why I try to reach out to other realms, and somehow porn stuff is likely to be the most enjoyable for me
Thanks for the advice about contractions! I will try it next time.

@hobohobo
I really want to change my user name
jojo is so out of time

@Daruna
it is quite poetic, but it also feels like some sort of displaced anger
are you facing some trouble?

@Mr_Person
Sure, I will!

you are totally and utterly incompetent

purge any notion of anything you create being worthwhile from your mind. you're another dime-a-dozen shitter on a site full of people who are entirely interchangeable with you.

you create nothing of value. you are shit, you are lazy, and worse than anything else: you are not funny. your shit could be the least bit remarkable if this stupid troll of yours had any comedic value at all, but it doesn't.

you partake in the worst of sins: you are the definition of boring.

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I expect nothing less from Dio-sama his self.

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I'm going to assume that you're not making these terrible releases out of spite and are actually giving your best here. There are a few points you must understand:
1) Your English is bad. Even if you've passed tests in the past, or have some certification of competence, you don't understand how the language is actually spoken in reality.
2) If you're trying to learn English by translating, stop. It's not a good way to learn a language. (I have learned that from experience, trust me.) The best way to learn is to immerse yourself in something where the language is spoken (such as watching English language films) and trying to get an intuition for what sounds natural and what doesn't.
3) Do you know what "contractions" are? It's when you combine two common words together into a shorter word. Here are some: do not --> don't, can not --> can't, let us --> let's, it is --> it's. English speakers almost always use these in casual speech, except for when we want to emphasize something (usually the "not" part). They are conspicuously absent from your releases. Just by using contractions, you could easily make your translations twice as readable.
4) Why do you keep changing the fonts randomly? This isn't what people meant when they said to use a comic book font.

I just realized how fruitless it would be to boil your failings as a scanlator down in to a few points so I'm stopping here.

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I might not be the right person to say this, but you're just extremely lazy and/or possibly baiting other people's attention.

It's just a 4 pages doujinshi, why only do it halfway? It's understandable if the doujin has multiple chapters that gets updated one chapter per update to be tagged as incomplete. What you're doing is just empty attention-seeking. And you do this alone too, right? If you're serious about people reading what you like to read, at least do better.

And there are like too many fonts used in it.

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you suck, stop uploading things

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