no surprise but MTL struggles with the way the Thai girl's accent is represented. also you used the cover from the Korean scanlation

005
OG: それじゃ奥さんしばらく留守を頼みますよ
TL: "Well, ma'am, I'm going to have to ask you to stay here for a while"
ED: she's house sitting

009
OG: 高級ボディーソープの匂いたまんね…
TL: "It smells like a fancy lady's soap..."
ED: he's saying he can't get enough fo the high end body soap smell

OG: ソープ
TL: N/A
ED: soap (directly related to next line)

014
OG: あなたは色キｘガイよ
TL: "You're a crazy person"
ED: a sex maniac

017
OG: へへへ…今頃ムショでシコってるんじゃないのか？
TL: "hehehe...isn't he in jail right now?"
ED: missing detail, jerking off

018
OG: やっ
TL: "Aoi..."
ED: these are stutters for the next line

OG: やめ…
TL: "Aoi..."
ED: these are stutters for the next line

020
OG: マタ殺セバ、イインダ…
TL: "I'll kill him from here"
ED: he's saying he can just kill him again

027
OG: うま… / うま…
TL: "Uah!" / "Hah!"
ED: he's saying it's delicious

036
OG: 借金モウ少シデ返セソウダッテ
TL: "She said she's going to pay back some of the money she owes"
ED: she's almost done paying off the debt

OG: マター緒二暮ラセルネ
TL: "Only a matter of time"
ED: before they can live together again

037
OG: 電話シテアゲテネオ母サンキット喜ブカラ
TL: "She said to call her when you're free"
ED: missing detail, Mei also suggests that his mom would be happy [to get a call]

038
OG: タカシふっくらしてきたね
TL: "I made you dinner"
ED: she's commenting about him getting fat

039
OG: ゴ飯遠慮スルコトナイ沢山食べルイイ？
TL: "You don't have to eat outside"
ED: she's telling him to eat a lot

040
OG: 辛イ気持チヨクワカル / デモオ母サンモット辛イ目二アッテル
TL: "I'm sorry you're having a hard time" / "Your momma's got a lot on her shoulders"
ED: she's saying she knows how bad he has it and then she's tells him that his mom has it worse

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Made better translations and much better typeset.

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