A fan translation

This my first time translating and I don't know anything about japanese language so this is mostly machine translated but I tried to properly check the grammar but there are some pages that I wasn't able to translate which I think would not be important and please be nice to me and my shitty editing skills :).....

big no, please refrain from doing this again

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I'll give you points for actually showing this one to those who complain about shitty translations like what you did, otherwise, try to study first.

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Wow...what a whore. I feel bad for Ken, he at least was trying to make her happy. She betrayed him almost immediately. Sad.

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People seem to be down voting this on principle. I haven't looked through the whole thing, but it doesn't seem bad. The small resolution is a shame though.

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Jako_Lin , you know, I think it's fine to cut off even more stuff that don't make sense when you proofread yours work, so the story flow more smoothly. Other than that, I think it's an OK work.

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Of course charlie hustle, but how can you say that some parts are not important if you can't read or understand JP...?!

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