This took a long time to do, and before you ask, I don't think I'll do another one of Gotarou’s work for a while unless it appeals to me. I'm focused on petrification work and while Gataro has a lot of that, I find much of it harsh, even more so than this, which is a lot.

Support the artist, etc etc.

There's so many things wrong with the title. You translated the title from the tank, but actually only translated the story found in the anthology, which has a completely different title (抗魔の聖女、何一つ守れず膨乳石化イキ狂い).

3 options:

1. I'm gonna assume you wanted to translate the tank, but this is an incomplete job and you only translated that story.
2. You took the raws from the tank, and decided to only translate that story, in which case you're gonna need to re-translate the title of that SPECIFIC story and add in () the title of tank, and not the anthology.
3. You took the raws from the anthology, but for some reason used the title and the cover page of the tank, in which case you need to rename according to the anthology.

Confusing, I know.

Besides the title, your cleaning and redrawing (non-existent) need work. Guides below.

General resources: https://gplinks.co/5Utpl80
Typesetting: https://gplinks.co/cV4qUpf
Redrawing: https://ouo.io/2XB3p
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630
How to export: /img/e-hentai/attachments/902314557077336064/997654450149789757/optimize_image.jpg

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I’m not getting paid for this so if you want a professional job then pay a translator on your own dime or do it yourself, you demanding asshole. I’ll change the name at least to support the artist - and yes, work went into this piece while it was part of a multi-artist anthology.

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@ardent9
>asking to do basic things is being demanding
I don't get paid either for 99% of the shit I translate, but I still try to do a good job, and improve where I can.

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RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2367883/d835aebe10/

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