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PART 1 (other languages):

French version here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2321980/1c6a7a61af/
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Italian version here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2293694/721080394e/
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German version here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2301269/dd17d9616c/
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Spanish version here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2326981/bd34a94252/

PART 2:

English version here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2322884/8a7142d981/
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Italian version here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2319516/39e1177824/
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French version here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2326975/8084ca517b/

Good start, but where is the mind control? the contract enforcing the wife to give sexual favor was closer to a blackmail than mind control IMO

Base +8, Unclarified -6

You need to improve on details... especially when you do closeups. There are several free morphs for daz studio to make mouth wider end even more open as right now clipping is serious issue, also get some nipple morph, krashwerks characters have some of the best one click nipple morphs out there. Also get better dick, right now stretched texture looks terrible, definitely invest in dictator and its add-ons if you want to have your work on competitive level. Other then that keep on practicing especially with light, if you dont want to do post production play around with ghostlight, good light is make or break for daz projects.

Base +6

My only issue with it is that I was unable to find any mind control. Did read it all, but did not ever see any. I think it might be mistagged.

Base +7

Might look into patreoning once more parts are out, Though it does have me wondering who the contract is with (my assumption the mafia a/mob) also just looking forward to the wife starting to dress and look how the new guy wants her, Body modifications in the future perhaps?

Last edited on 06 August 2022, 05:18.

Base +6

This would've been better with better dialogue. It's very messy.

That being said.. the farther you take this, the more the content alone can carry it.

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Reply to Vypress:
For now, the contract is with an unspecified company that provides loans in exchange for sexual services (in the next episode I could go into that part better). As for the second argument I can only answer you like this to avoid spoilers: as the title says, she will be his property. ;)

Reply to AtotehZ:
I am not satisfied with the dialogue boxes and the chosen font. I can assure you that it will be a part that will definitely be improved in the next few episodes.

Again, thanks to both of you for the feedback!

Base +1

Need a cuck story where the bull is actually a flabby small penis moron that the wife and his husband make fun off later on.

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J'ai bien aimé ! Merci ! +5

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Thanks for your feedback Edd085! The Part 2 will be out early September and I'm also working on the French translation! Passez une bonne journée!

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