Man, this was more work than I expected.
anyway, hope you enjoy!

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Base +6, siuvu +8, huajijie +3, kijiwu18 +6

What's cybeast talking about? Looking through the tank, it looks like this is a standalone. From what I could tell, there is NTR in the tank, but that's with different characters.

Base +8, Alcrian +6, Darksword696 +20, nukemissle +15

17: "hyman" => "hymen"
25: "iyou're" => "you're"

Base +8, Barberbar +5, asriel02 +8, mellowjello +8, Evyy +17, TCJJ +8, Suijiro90 +6

edit: I'm retarded, some of my settings were wrong KEK.

1. Level your pages. See cleaning guide.
2. Pretty sure this is in RGB. It should be in grayscale.
3. Your redrawing and your typesetting need work.

Guides:

General resources: https://ouo.io/sG88Bn
Typesetting: https://ouo.io/TR05b
Redrawing: https://ouo.io/as11q9
Basic cleaning: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PANrCwHy630

Last edited on 14 August 2022, 21:57.

Base +17, Refuge -7, sgc_geh +11, TCJJ +8

Felt like its been decades since ayakawa riku made vanilla

Is it possible for the whole tankoubon to get translated perhaps??

Last edited on 15 August 2022, 12:39.

Base +6

"My childhood friend I've been boning constantly for over a year now has feelings for someone? Damn, who could it possibly be?"

Not bad overall, but I feel like the MC is a bit of a moron. That, and getting upset at the "anal only" rule, which she points out that HE came up with in the first place.

Base +6, mellowjello +8, Instaburst +6, TCJJ +8, CHT +9