honestly, not even that bad compared to a lot of the shovelware comics that get uploaded by artists, and the models aswell are good ones, and there are actually sequence pages rather than just off-panel transformation
so all in all, 7/10, especially when compared to the majority out there (including many who charge for their works)
@Zer0TF Sorry for the spam, but in response to your comment about not being good at dialogue writing or plot, I really like this storyline and would be interested in lending a hand. I've already written a couple chapters past this point for my own enjoyment. If you're interested in them let me know and we'll get them to you.
I will say though I enjoyed the dialogue so far in this.
This is actually quite nice, Zer0TF. I'm hoping for more. It doesn't seem like shoveled stuff. I like the fantasy here. I also appreciate the more "human-like" proportions. Thank you!