Awesome, next chapters! Seriously, whoever come with idea for this story is genius. Wholesome orc, perverted elf, #$%&!@ mage, funny noble and many others. What's not to love here?
The extra world-building kinda kills this story for me. I liked it when it was just the orc and the elf, when it was "orcs aren't rapists" and not "this particular orc isn't a rapist." Also kinda wish that the punchline was "she eventually won him over" and not "she eventually raped him herself." Kinda betrays the subversive element that not every story about an orc and an elf has to involve rape if the story eventually involves rape.
Still, four out of five, I guess.
Base +6, BaperNu +9, PinguPrin +7, tobeunforgiven2 +24
"XX eventful years later"?... wif?.. It's like how instantly to end the story that's in-a-middle-of-nowhere-far from end... It's sad, really. And then drawing bonus chapters, as you've ruined the main story already.// Facapalm.jpg