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Josou Saserarete Futanari Kouhai Servant ni Onnanoko ni Sarechau Hon (FateGrand Order) (machine translated)

Doujinshi
Posted:2022-05-15 20:49
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Language:English  
File Size:679.4 MB
Length:20 pages
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Posted on 15 May 2022, 20:49 by:   JDhentai69     PM
Uploader Comment
I'm putting this here so this comment Will always be at the top of the page
I Just want to say that while i haven't really done a good job defending myself and handling this shitshow i'm also not Just going to get shit on and not fight back regardless of what you think of me now and my machine translation you all are no better than me i Know that no matter what i say it won't matter because i'm already the punching back of this post or even this website at this point which is unfortunate but what can you do about it again i won't Just let myself get shit on without punching back but i Will also acknowledge my mistakes i shouldn't Just call anyone who dissagrees with me an asshole or arrogant but i was so pissed off that i Just said whatever i could to get back at anyone who was Just shitting on me and to be honest a lot of these comments are Just straight up nasty like holy shit some of the things you people are saying really hurts i won't even try to hide that anymore also making assumbtions about me like saying i lie about my age or that i Don't actually have any Passion for translating even though like i said i basically Just translated and used Photoshop for the majority of the weekend which i normally use to rest and Just enjoy myself i really hate when people Just make up assumbtions about me so i felt personally attacked regardless that doesn't mean i should have been such an asshole to Just anyone who didn't like me dissagreed with me or simply stated their opinion but the one's who are Just making fun of me and are probably stil shitting on me the only thing i'm going to say to you is fuck you while i might have been mostly in the wrong you are Just shitting on me for no reason at this point anyway to one's i unjustly called asshole or pieces of shit or whatever i said i'm sorry but that doesn't mean most of you are in the right either but i am willing to let it go because regardless what you think i am An adult 24 years old so i'm going to do the responseble thing and appologize and move on i hope this is enough for the one's i again called and asshole or whatever i'm sorry again
Posted on 15 May 2022, 20:56 by:   Scumbini     PM
Score +254
Everyday we drift further from God's light.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 20:58 by:   cutegyaru     PM
Score +446
Alright, let's dispel some misconceptions that you STILL have. All machine translators are EQUALLY shit. DeepL is usually seen as "better" because it mostly makes coherent English sentences. Grammatically correct =/= accurate translation. How would you even know which one is good? You can't compare to the Japanese text, because you don't understand it.

You want real advice? Instead of wasting your time doing "4 machine translations", just go learn Japanese.

>but no matter how hard i try photoshop makes it simply impossible
What? PS is a tool. You being bad or inexperienced at using it doesn't make it bad. In fact, it's probably the best software out there for cleaning and redrawing.

>i'd rather focus on translating more doujinshi's
God, please don't. You're completely, 100% reliant on MTL.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 21:02 by:   Meikuumon     PM
Score +135
JDhentai69 please delete this gallery and never bother again with translation or uploads if you don't know CJK-Languages and image editing.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 21:04 by:   wootwoot123     PM
Score +75
Not interested in MTL or rewrite. Delete this garbage and stop wasting your time.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 21:25 by:   Scumbini     PM
Score +289
>english isn't even my mother language
Then why "translate" into it? Why not MTL into your own language and deal with that community shitting on you?

>so instead of complaining and calling something i put multiple days of hard work and dedication in garbage let's see you learn japanese and translate doujinshi's for free as a hobby like me
He doesn't know.jpg
Also, time invested automatically = good end product right?
Posted on 15 May 2022, 21:35 by:   cutegyaru     PM
Score +239
>in my experience they are actually pretty good if you know how to use them
Again, you're talking out of your fucking ass. You don't know how good they are because you don't fucking understand the languages you're translating TO and FROM.

>also i literally don't have time to learn japanese that would take years i simply don't have the time or patience
tl:dr: you're lazy

>that people like you in this community are arrogant
Excuse me, but knowing the languages you're translating to and from, and having proper fucking grammar are BARE MINIMUMS. If asking for the bare minimum is being "arrogant", then I don't know what to fucking tell you.

>also i won't stop this is a huge passion of mine
No, it's not. If this was a passion of yours, you'd take time and effort to make it right, which you aren't.

> you arrogant ungrateful piece of fucking shit asshole
Yeah, yeah. Let it all out. It still doesn't make you a translator, and even less of a good one, you fucking clown. Oh, and who the fuck should be grateful for this garbage? Are you seriously expecting people to thank you? lmao
Posted on 15 May 2022, 21:43 by:   nikgtasa     PM
Score +90
@JDhentai69 Comment tags: rough grammar, zero punctuation
Posted on 15 May 2022, 21:44 by:   cutegyaru     PM
Score +86
>that massive wall of ramblings
I ain't reading that lol

>i won't stop just to spite you
You're hilarious. Are you sure you're 24? Maybe you added an extra number in there.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 21:48 by:   Scumbini     PM
Score +165
This nigga writing paragraphs and saying it's everyone else that's mad.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 22:25 by:   Duelyeast     PM
Score -4
I must also demand a wall of text dedicated to me.

You suck, now ramble.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 22:29 by:   Duelyeast     PM
Score +19
How can I be ungrateful? I did absolutely nothing with the gallery except for inspecting the translation. Zero pleasure, zero downloads, but I got around 100 Gy (radiation unit) of toxicity from you. That's pretty good.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 22:49 by:   Daruna     PM
Score +10
obvious bait account
Posted on 15 May 2022, 23:21 by:   Duelyeast     PM
Score +13
Zero punctuation! But worry not, you're quite the punching bag.
I came here to share my poem, just so you know, traps aren't gay.
However, I can't say the same thing for MTL.
Posted on 15 May 2022, 23:26 by:   Vanilla Cream     PM
Score +166
RAW

@orangemouse
If you read even one comment from cutegyaru or JDhentai69 you'd understand why.
TLDR; JDhentai69 thinks machine translating is fine, but cutegyaru says he wouldn't even know what "fine" is because he doesn't understand Japanese.

@JDhentai69
Regardless of what the others are saying, you're not making a good case for yourself:
The lack of punctuations and capitalization in your comments are a bit iffy.
You insulting others don't help your case in any way, even if they they themselves were bad actors in this case.
Your galley is missing the original cover art page and is 200 MB larger than the RAW.
Lastly, P.1:"Magic dresses"?! Do you mean mystic codes? 魔術礼装 = Mystic Codes BRUUUHHH

Edit:
JDhentai69, look, no one really cares how much time you took, how old you are, or your side of the story.
What they really care about is whether it is well translated or not.
That's the reason why they point out your own failings and gave you tips (on top of them egging you on).
No one cares if you apologize or not. It's the internet.
If what they say really bothers you then don't read the comments anymore. Go outside and "touch grass".

If you want to continue translating and not get dumped on, then put more effort and time into learning Japanese. Doesn't have to be tomorrow, a month, or even a year.
If you've got the passion, do it. If not, then stop.

Cutegyaru has already made the point that no matter what or how many MTLs you use, in the end, you don't have the context to translate it.
You can exactly see this in my example above: 魔術礼装 = Mystic Codes. You have limited knowledge of Fate so you failed to pick this up on the very first textbox of the very first page.
This alone shows you no matter how many MTLs you use, you can/will get a wrong translation. And a translation is more than just input to output.
It just so happens in this case it's more reliant on how well you know Fate.

MTLs have had a recent boom in this age - most likely due to the rise of popularity in anime in mainstream audiences.
If you look back on the uploads with the "rough grammar" tag you'll notice that there has been a rapid increase since 2019.
You'll find that for 2020-2022 this clocks in at 382 results of the 501 non-expunged galleries.
So, in roughly 2 years there has been a flood of "rough grammar" tagged galleries that make up 76% of the total "rough grammar" tagged galleries.
Some of these are just rough grammar, but before the introduction of the "rough translation" tag, it and the "rewrite" tag were a catch-all for poor translations. (They still kind of are even now.)

With this in mind you can see how some of the fluent English speaking community is fed up with the state of uploads.
There's the constant surprise of finding a doujin/manga you like being translated... only for it to be a MTL or poorly mishandled.
Now imagine having that done several times a month over a timespan of a few years and you have these comment sections.
Last edited on 16 May 2022, 00:29.
Posted on 16 May 2022, 00:01 by:   Daruna     PM
Score +26
take your meds schizo
Posted on 16 May 2022, 01:17 by:   hjerry     PM
Score +95
What you are supposed to do is not post machine translations when you know that everyone wants you not to.

You know that everyone will hate it. You know that they'll tell you that they hate it, but you post it anyway, and want to somehow be the victim for doing so.

Better idea, if you don't want to get hated on for something that you know you'll get hated on for, and that helps absolutely no one, just don't post it.
Posted on 16 May 2022, 01:25 by:   Draw99Gray     PM
Score +16
DELETE YOUR GALLERIES AND GET THE FUCK OUT OF THIS SITE, NEVER COME BACK
clear enough? no one wants to see this shit.
Posted on 16 May 2022, 01:57 by:   fatman18     PM
Score +48
Your work isnt hard work. My phone can do what you did for free in seconds. My phone camera can get a translation on par with this. Literally the only thing of value here would be actually getting the translation onto the pages and even that is done subpar.

If you actually care for this and are passionate, stop. Just stop, thats it. As was explained before, every single one of these you upload reduces the chance of a real translation ever seeing the light of day, which fucks the entire thing for everyone.

I even believe you, I do not think you are doing this outta malice or that you are some kinda elaborate troll. But every single time you have uploaded shit like this, it has been universally shit on it, downvoted and made fun of. People do not want this. If you feel like this is great and you want it? Keep it to yourself, do not upload it. You are perpetuating this cycle by shitting in the mouths of everyone, when you could just NOT UPLOAD IT. I beg you for the love of god, if you are passionate about this, either actually learn the langauges or do not make your works public.
Posted on 16 May 2022, 02:16 by:   Chen Nyan~     PM
Score +27
There is a simple answer to all this: Stop doing machine translations and fuck off.
Posted on 16 May 2022, 03:58 by:   cutegyaru     PM
Score +80
@JDhentai69
Take a breather. You've made this a thousand times worse on yourself than it had to be. I make the SAME criticism to anyone who MTLs. My goal isn't to come to your gallery to cause you a nervous breakdown or to insult you - it's to convince you to actually give a fuck. MTL sucks, and that's just an unfortunate reality. No amount of time or effort put into it will make it better.

Instead, I encourage you to learn Japanese, or, if you really like scanlation, to improve your editing and join a scanlation group that already has JP>EN translators.
Posted on 16 May 2022, 03:58 by:   fatman18     PM
Score +14
I TAKE IT BACK YOU ARE A FUCKING TROLL WHY THE FUCK IS THE FILESIZE 680 FUCKING MB FOR 20 PAGES WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING
Posted on 16 May 2022, 05:42 by:   S-One     PM
Score +6
I'd say you're a troll, but I think you may just actually be retarded
Posted on 16 May 2022, 06:04 by:   Tatchy     PM
Score +41
@JDhentai69 In your last upload, I tried to be nice and explain that making good translations is a very time intensive skill that requires a lot of work, and that it was admirable that you had a lot of passion, but that like any artist, you had to get all the bad creations out of the way before you started making quality products that people want to look at.

But after reading your Ebony Dementia Darkness Raven Way level of writing in that 400 word run-on sentence with ZERO punctuation, it's pretty clear that this is either some deep level troll or that you are actually mentally ill. Dude. You aren't fluent in either Japanese OR English, but you want to make Japanese to English translations? This is some unironic "Graphic Design is my Passion." bullshit. Just stop. Please.

You ask people what they want you to do? They want you to delete these galleries so that actual translators won't skip these works assuming they've already been translated. Come back when you actually speak Japanese and can translate it into whatever your mother tongue is.
Posted on 16 May 2022, 07:48 by:   Cisla     PM
Score +7
translated or not the comment section is more entertaining than the original doujin
sasuga sadpanda
Posted on 16 May 2022, 08:03 by:   Xalren525     PM
Score +6
That uploader comment was unintentionally hilarious. Maybe take a break and do this stuff in your native language instead?
Posted on 16 May 2022, 09:53 by:   danielwain     PM
Score +9
MTL can be okay, if the person doing it has a grasp on the source material, the language they're translating to and the kinks of MTL. I'll take a well-edited MTL for fap material, let's not pretend h-doujins are holy texts or literary masterpieces that require a degree in Japanese, most of the time. Sure, proper translations are better and some will lament it being MTL because it totally won't ever get a proper translation after that, but most people won't really care, if it's good enough. This, however, is not. Lack of punctuation, spelling errors (to close, rather than too close etc.), very poorly constructed English sentences, words getting cut off without - to show it's one word in speech bubbles and completely random exclamations ("Yes don't stretch your shoulders good for-nothing") make this far from good enough. At least make it good enough outside of the translation itself and you'll get a lot less shit for it.
Posted on 16 May 2022, 10:14 by:   thekiller2413     PM
Score +6
This guy's grasp on the English language is so small that he thinks this is alright. He doesn't even have a clue. I'm not a native speaker and I think there's that point where you can mostly understand what you read but without any idea of nuance. Thank god I never posted any of my "translations" online.

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