A new commission
Original: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/2024827/1397386302/

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Yup! My exact reaction seeing this one in particular not only translated, but uncensored as well. God Dammit I love you Internet.

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Welp guess I'm breaking my dick tonight

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LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Now we just need all of his works translated as well :P

Thank you for sharing!

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Thank you for translating Motsuaki's work, it's rarely translated because there's just so much text. Much appreciated.

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This is more a musing and curiosity slightly aside from the comic here, which is great by the way but..

The guy on the receiving end of the NTR I don't care about, but I DO like the idea of the girl and other dude just kinda sparking wildly in a way that's just sudden and pretty explosive. Like, this has a quality to it that isn't just "girl turns into useless whore" and I like this kind of route. I imagine this type of stuff can be nice because of how grounded the situation can potentially feel, with emotions being established and then torn etc etc, but I love the idea of two characters just relenting to each other in such a wild way. Is there.. more like that, that isn't just NTR?

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This...isn't as shitty as NTR usually is. It's overly exaggerated in its presentation as hentai usually is, but there wasn't anything stupid or convoluted here.

Kinda does demonstrate the importance of being honest and forthright without any bullshit to move it along. So yeah, not too bad.

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the childhood friend got the nudes first
the other guy banged her first.

Yeah, if he was more honest, he had a chance, but took the beta way.

feel bad for the guy because he stretched it so long she got jumped by another guy, and since he didn't show any signs of caring for her, she just went along with it, but yeah, technically this ain't NTR, the other guy just went in for the kill first, this guy had his whole childhood and puberty to go for her and he never took the first step.

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maybe its time to add the sub genre of netorare called BSS "Boku ga Saki ni Suki Datta no ni" meaning "Even though I loved them first" (mc is into the girl but not a couple) because majority of motsuaki's work is like this

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yep, got noone to blame except the guy for not being honest, come on man she willingly sent you nudes without you asking and thats what you do?!

its pretty similar to that other work of his but it was a harem protag lol

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The poor girl tried so hard to make his balls drop, but after getting an answer like that from sending nudes she just had to assume he was asexual.

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"Wanna see my tits?"

"lol no"

Can't say he didn't deserve what was coming to him

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On the other hand she fell so easily for the other guy, slut much? So the kid dodged a bulle- No fuck it grow some fucking balls dude I can't defend you you goddamn wimp this time I refuse!

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The only flaw of this work is that it has practically no FMC dialogue
It's almost 100% MC thought dialogue

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Girl : *Send you a nude*
Guy : No ! That's inapporiate !!

Guy ; AHHH WHY I DON'T HAVE GF ! I WANNA BANGGG

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thanks for the translation!

I hope motsuaki comes back to an NTR harem one day, but this time with as much kissing as this one!

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@hijikato Technically ntr doesn't depend on the relationships status of the MC and the girl, the only thing that matters is his feelings towards her. For this reason, there are mother ntr, sister ntr, osananajimi ntr, etc. If some other guy fucked your crush then congratulations, you were ntred.

BTW, this story is actually realistic. Yeah, from the biological point of view p2 tells the absolute truth. Despite what western society tries to put in people's heads, humans are designed to start having sex in puberty. Our distant ancestors rarely survived to their mid-twenties, so when else would they have time to have kids and raise them? Lol.

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Holy shit I never thought I'd see this translated let alone decensored too. Bless you translators and the commissioner.

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I mean, MC's NTR is pretty self-inflicted. But even if he was honest, the moment MH had seen that video of Saruo masturbating, it would've ended this way anyway. XD

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