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Listen, man. I know you love Sakai Minato, but for the love of god, stop translating his works. I'm already fucking working on them. All of your translations are filled with awful typesetting and typos, and you clearly don't care enough to improve. This has been pointed out in many of your past projects.

Here's some resources to improve: https://ouo.io/sIF14v

p.4: Thank you alice, it was delicious => Missing capital A and missing period.
p.4. This is full of punctuation mistakes. Literally every sentence.
p.5 Same here. Alice is also never capitalized.
p.8: Please don't enter! => Makes no sense. Do you mean "Please, don't put it inside!"?
p.12: are you ready to get pregnant now? => Again, no capitalization.
p.15: as expected => No capitalization.
p.15: it's time => ibid.
p.16: Sorry for being a bad hole => no period
p.16: Get fertilized and reflect! Reflect on what? Missing something here.
p.17: afterwords => Afterwards,
p.23: wan't

Here's a list of all the projects I WILL be releasing by him.

Let me repeat: I WILL BE GIVING THESE WORKS A FULL, COMPETENT TRANSLATION:

(C94) [Right away (Sakai Minato)] Tenshi-sama wa Chorokute Kawaii (Touhou Project)
[Right away (Sakai Minato)] Nagasare Arisu wa Choro Kute Kantan ni Haran jau (Touhou Project) [Digital] - THIS ONE
(Reitaisai 14) [Right away (Sakai Minato)] you mu down (Touhou Project)

Last edited on 21 October 2021, 04:54.

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Anyone who favorited this release despite the glaring ESL used in this work needs to get their eyes checked.

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@ PsychicDoom

Forgive me for asking this question what does ESL mean? does that mean they are from around Europe or something?

@cutegyaru

The resource that you link seems useful incase i want to do the editing myself with the given translation.

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@Mr.Heartbeat

ESL = English as a Second Language

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@Mr.Heartbeat
No need. I'm going to translate and do proper editing.

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@cutegyaru

Okay, and just to clarify i meant doing the editing with the translation given by the people i commission.

Got to learn how to edit first before doing the real thing tho.

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