This one took a while, it's such a long one. Anyway have fun ya degenerates.

Thanks for the translation as always.

Base +6, AhKai +6, Mekoruu +12

Page 25: My -> Me
Page 32: Messaging -> Massaging
Page 38: Wriggling -> Wriggled
Page 39: Sucking -> Breathing
Page 50: You -> Your
Page 55: "All made clear" means learning knowledge. Not the intended poison removal.
Page 61: "UES" is not a word.
Page 102: At -> And
Page 107: Our -> Your
Page 130: I can't seem to parse the sentence beginning with "Alright".
Page 137: Smell -> Smelly, Stick -> Sticky
Page 142: Here -> Her. Also a missing space.
Page 143: Pick -> Picked
Page 145: Kids -> Kid is and Kid's.
Page 156: "That he is standing" or "him standing"
Page 161: Perhaps a "THAT" before the "you"?
Page 167: Turns -> Turned
Page 190: Will -> Would
Page 198: Have -> Are
Page 212: The edge of the text is just barely outside the page.
Page 213: Thieve's -> Thieves'
Page 216: I'll -> I'd. Also "Stand on ceremony"?
Page 220: Thumb -> Thumbs
Page 246: "Walls of fleshy" is quite strange.
Page 253: A -> An
Page 259: Missing space

Bit of a pity that you didn't translate the status screen labels everywhere.

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