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Zuko knocks up Azula, Izumi is their daughter, they live happily ever after, the end.

Shame it'll take forever for this to be finished; it's been going for about 3 years now. Story would have made a lot more sense if Azula lost her bending, because it makes absolutely no sense how she would get raped by some random grunts when she's one of the best fighters in the series. But I think the story will touch on this and reveal that she could have broken out of the prison anytime she wanted, but she stayed because she enjoyed being dominated after getting everything she wanted for all her life up until now. Still, she was getting restrained even before getting raped; nothing suggested she enjoyed being dominated until the gangrape started. Yeah, she really should have just lost her bending; even if Zuko would want her to serve him as a fighter, she's too dangerous to trust with her bending.

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@greengrasstree Yeah
Although, being someone who is currently commissioning a Blackfire comic that's ongoing on this site, I can empathize with the commissioner. Stuff happens, be it a big transition, a new job, lack of funds or something shitty IRL taking one away. Then on the flip side, when one does want come back to it, it can also be that the artist themselves becomes busy, has new responsibilities, or can't spare the time to continue the comic.

In a perfect scenario it'd be one and done, but things are rarely perfect. Instead, I think it best to just keep looking forward to this, whenever it gets updated.

And yeah about the losing bending part, it is nice to have some context or reason for her to be raped. I mean, even without the fire bending power, she knows martial arts so I can imagine she would have given some sort of fight so it's good the guards are really meaty and there's more than one of them.

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The ups and downs of commissions. You do not control the outcome you just look at the result.

As for the story, remember this what supposed to happen after the show when Azula went crazy so use that for the weak setup(we think some drugs were also mentioned).
The art is great though so try not to be too hard on it. We view unfinished works as outlines for the imagination and see the different ways it could up, it is pretty fun.

Imagine: The same work but it is Ty Lee and Mei "training" Azula on Zuko's (or hell Katara's) order. Or...
The same work but Plot Twist! right when Azula is broken * Lightning * She was faking the whole time. Or...

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If she went crazy, then that would potentially make it more dangerous for her to still have her bending; this bitch can use lightning. And she wasn't given drugs until after getting raped. These guards took some crazy risks to gangrape a killer martial artist who already attempted to bite one of them; they stuck it in her mouth anyway? Furthermore, this gallery was missing the page where she's on the ship to meet Zuko (EDIT: Now it's in, but you didn't need to add random shota/loli stuff. They have nothing to do with this comic; you may as well add every Azula pic MrPotatoParty has drawn, then); she was considering overpowering all the guards and breaking free, so I don't think her mental state would hinder her fighting skills.

But I just remembered that her defenseless father is also in prison, so maybe she's trying to protect him? Although Azula has never cared much for her family in the show, so that can't be it; if she would turn on her brother for her own gain, then obviously she isn't gonna stay loyal to her dad. This comic's premise would have only made sense if Azula lost her bending, period; after Zuko permanently makes Azula his bitch, he could have Aang restore it. Also, I don't think this is a commission; MrPotatoParty chose to make this comic, because Azula is his waifu.

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Who's that kid she's having sex with? Is that Zuko's son or something? Azula as an aunt is kinda hot

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It's an unrelated pic of an older Azula fucking Zuko's son. She is pretty hot when she's older; I don't think MrPotatoParty should make this comic any longer than he plans it to be as he's pretty burnt out after all this time, but a time skip to when she's older would be nice.

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