-Multiple Transformations -EXTRA EXTRA LONG story! Front and Back Cover! 25 Pages! -Head Swap! -Transformation! -Much much more! (Well a reasonable amount of more. Let's not go crazy.)
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I really wish a machine like that existed in the real world.. so many people who doesn’t feel correct in theirs bodies because the born into a wrong body.. it’s could help a lot..just be sure there no corruption gonna happened..
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I enjoyed it while I was reading it, but once it was done I couldn't help but wonder about the logic of it…
The trial swap was for a month. They reunited just before the end of it. At that time he announced that he'd decided to change permanently, and that it had taken two weeks to get the appointment.
Two weeks sounds like a lot but it really isn't. It seems like the real-world equivalent would be trying to get a consultation with a medical specialist, and two weeks isn't long at all for that. Therefore, magical transformations seem to be as common and accessible in the "Bay City" setting as mid-range medical treatments are in the real world (at least in a relatively wealthy and industrialized country). More than a prescription, but less than major surgery.
So I gotta ask, why didn't he do this before? If he was so desperate to recapture the feeling of being a woman, why didn't he just spend the money and get the transformation on his own? It can't be *that* expensive if he could afford it on a makeup artist's salary and probably limited savings.
The only reason I can think of — and this also explains the practical need for head swapping — is that a full-body transformation is once in a lifetime and irreversible. Even if he could do it on his salary and in one easy appointment, he wasn't absolutely sure that he wanted to take that last step.
If this is true, fine, but it would help to make it explicit. It would make his dilemma, and the emotional journey he goes through, more significant.
Unfortunately, making such transformations irreversible might contradict other stories in the "Bay City" setting, so…
I guess my point is that if you're going to make your "Bay City" setting a regular thing, you should hammer out the rules of your magic system. Do the world building. It's worth the effort, even for stories like this.