First Timer here, translating is hard, so can I get some (You)s?

One down, a few more to go. I plan on translating other works by this artist.

I probably won't make any edits unless it's something major, but I would still like to hear some feedback so that I can better the quality of my future translations.

I plan on doing Doll Koma 3 next and will probably start next week since I have some exams this week I have to work on.

I hope my work was up to your standards!

RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1847224/1f2a4881ff/

Welcome, we always love more translators.

Base +40, Hellsker +9, gogo imgrey +6, Mugen no Saga +8

Wait, I think I saw banssee's picture.....?

Base +7, gogo imgrey +6

Always happy to see more people start translating! If you need any help, advice or even proofreading, feel free to hit me up on Discord, MMAG#3565

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a great 4koma,
even for those who don't know anything about GFL, it's quite readable

and it's a very text heavy translation by virtue of being a gag 4koma, so props to you, translator. The average (ero)doujin would be less text, if you'd be interested.

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