I hate this, even though I love HunterxHunter, I love both these characters, and I love tickle torture. The grammar and spelling are awful, the dialogue and "plot" are out of character and make no sense even within the context of this comic by itself.
Artificial Nen sand, what? Gon and Pitou enter the beach together casually, which implies they're friends in this setting, but then he rapes her and leaves her in the sand for others to rape, what? Did the guy who wrote this forget how this started by the time he got to the ending? Have them be friends or keep them as enemies, but if someone switches allegiances then something needs to happen in between to warrant it.