Please help. I tried reading this and now I smell burnt toast

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chichi is the best dbz milfs

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If there are an ashole that deserves being netorared that is Goku.

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Trying to NTR'd the strongest man in the universe? Man but fuck Toriyama and Toei Animation, they ruined a lot of what made Goku great with Super.

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Scumbag Yamcha at it again. If DBZ is a hentai series then no one will be able to beat Yamcha and his sexual prowess

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Who translated this, Majin Buu?

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the old man ruined the whole thing

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@Vile Mk 2

Yeah. Goku had this shit coming overdue.

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Wha... wait a minute, is this a sex!?

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RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1810711/bd4b29b453/

You really, really need a proofreader to go over your work next time.

Here are some of the more glaring errors, which I've corrected:

P2
Panel 1: This is a story about someone who was left behind on earth by a man who went to a contest that will decide the fate of the universe: the "Ka Tournament".

P3
Panel 2: "How dare he leave only me out of the participants?"

P4
Panel 2: "Why are you relaxing while the earth is in such a precarious state and about to be destroyed?"

P5
Panel 1: Clothes, not chlothes.

P6
Panel 1: "That suit really fits you perfectly, Chichi-san."
Panel 2: "You've got to be kidding! What do you mean it 'fits me perfectly'?"
Panel 2: "My hair down there is clearly visible, isn't it?"
Panel 3: "You haven't been taking care of your pubic hair, have you?"
Panel 4: "Furthermore, it kind of smells."
Panel 5: "It doesn't smell!"

That's over ten grammatical and spelling errors in the first five pages alone -- more than enough to qualify for the "poor grammar" tag.

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@metalsensei Stfu Super hater

Y Yamcha tho it could’ve been anybody shoot make up a character to fuck her but y does it gotta be Yamcha

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Cucking Krillin is risky enough, although everybody and their talking cat seems to have fucked Android 18, but pissing off a guy who blows up planets? That's just suicidal.

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