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[Shoot The Moon (Fuetakishi)] Shoutengai no Ana Zuma-tachi | The Downtown Shopping Street's Wife's Holes [English] [Digital] {Stopittarpit} {CrowKarasu} {=WhiteSymphony=}

[シュート・ザ・ムーン (フエタキシ)] 商店街の穴妻たち [英訳] [DL版]

Doujinshi
Posted:2020-02-09 10:37
Parent:1565057
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:55.66 MB
Length:52 pages
Favorited:1967 times
Rating:
383
Average: 4.60

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Posted on 09 February 2020, 10:37 UTC by:   Stopittarpit     PM
Uploader Comment
Edited by Stopittarpit
Translated by Stopittarpit, CrowKarasu and =WhiteSymphony=

Commissioned by anon and Stopittarpit

Contact address: Stopittarpit33@gmail.com

I sincerely apologise to everyone who saw the initial
English translation of this piece and were disappointed
with the way it turned out.

After commissioning the very helpful CrowKarasu and
whiteSymphony to take a look at certain pages I can
clearly see where I went wrong. It has been made
clear that these need to be taken more seriously.

I don't believe this is a rewrite, I believe we have
created a proper translation for you all to enjoy.

Thank you for reading and please enjoy.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 02:33 UTC by:   Hakrei     PM
Score +97
Fueta Kishi's milf designs are incredibly sexy and top-tier,
even despite this artist focusing on the blackmail/ntr genre instead of the vanilla genre I remember from this artist
Thanks for sharingh
Posted on 05 February 2020, 02:56 UTC by:   hentailover6983     PM
Score +39
Even though I saw the NTR tag, I was instantly hooked by the cover design and the beautiful MILF~
Posted on 05 February 2020, 04:02 UTC by:   DinoCock     PM
Score +96
...I feel like we’re missing a bit of context here lol
Posted on 05 February 2020, 04:26 UTC by:   soltyice     PM
Score +60
So this has a prequel?
Posted on 05 February 2020, 06:44 UTC by:   E1Diablo     PM
Score +25
I am 90% positive this has a prequel, I don't know if it was TL'ed though.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 06:48 UTC by:   Mainsaro     PM
Score +13
Is this a sequel?
Posted on 05 February 2020, 07:06 UTC by:   dHi     PM
Score +64
an NTR doujin with positive comments from people? a step towards world peace, i guess :D
Posted on 05 February 2020, 07:21 UTC by:   suratkabar     PM
Score +5
he looked like the dude that got cucked in Touchuukasou 6 lol
feel like it some kind of wierd spin off lmao
Posted on 05 February 2020, 07:39 UTC by:   darkwing42     PM
Score +49
Many thanks for the translation.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 08:19 UTC by:   mickl3     PM
Score +204
Either there's a prequel where we're lacking context, or everything is completely jumbled translation-wise for the backstory.

Edit: From what I can gather from Page 4 and Page 9, he fucked the sister-in-law and got her pregnant (who was working to help her younger sister despite having an older brother with a store). This is who the "daughter" he mentions should actually be since there's no way Kaori has a daughter at a fuckable age especially when Shinji is infertile.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 08:56 UTC by:   philoer     PM
Score +99
It's a rewrite, I've read the raw, he went weird with this one.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 09:14 UTC by:   Aldarris     PM
Score +12
MILF Makoto?
Posted on 05 February 2020, 11:09 UTC by:   Nekoavenger     PM
Score +89
@suratkabar Anything he makes at this point would be a relief from that bald headed shit kid and the retard sisters.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 12:01 UTC by:   BamBlackStar     PM
Score +98
Theres no prequel guys, its most likely due to the translation not being properly done that the backstory part seems off
Last edited on 05 February 2020, 12:23 UTC.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 13:04 UTC by:   reignengine     PM
Score +13
This is breath of fresh air, his bald headed asshole 'friemd' and the dumb slut sisters are getting stale, he should end it but it is popular to readers.

Also, the translator kinda went weird with this one.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 13:20 UTC by:   Stopittarpit     PM
Score +38
I do indeed admit the translation on this was sloppy,
especially on page 4. Could somebody please
point me in the right direction for a group of other translators
that could help? Like a particular discussion board or a discord
server? I do still want to improve.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 13:20 UTC by:   faggotop     PM
Score +6
I don't know how to feel about this.
Posted on 05 February 2020, 16:23 UTC by:   korbooooo     PM
Score +14
@stopittarpit thanks for translation either way and it's nice to see you want to improve even more. looking forward to more of your work
Posted on 05 February 2020, 17:16 UTC by:   tearsax     PM
Score +37
Generic af. Fuetakishi's works are getting worse and worse.
Posted on 06 February 2020, 00:31 UTC by:   Forgunia     PM
Score +19
"I'm doing this for you Shinji" Yes, I'm sure he would love the idea of financing some other guy's genetic legacy for at least the next 18 years.
Posted on 06 February 2020, 01:24 UTC by:   StockingHitler~~~     PM
Score +33
Is no one going to point out how the MC has the fucking byakugan
Posted on 06 February 2020, 03:17 UTC by:   poke--     PM
Score +5
I miss his stories about highschool elfs. Not these NTR things.
Posted on 06 February 2020, 22:41 UTC by:   bergil     PM
Score +93
So there is actually a person who paid money for this shit quality translation. I'd get it if this was for free but this is a rip-off. Instead of writing what you won't accept to translate try being more honest and say you are shamelessly charging $1.20 per page even though your Japanese is meh at best.
Last edited on 08 February 2020, 11:17 UTC.
Posted on 09 February 2020, 13:58 UTC by:   ART65     PM
Score +6
"Well compared to your husband, won't you say my cock is more useful ???"
> "no answer / oh yeah i didn't think about cock size before"
"You are taking pleasure from sex !"
> Oh no ! No ! Don't say that ! Noooo !

Women in hentai are weird...

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