OK this is the first time I've seen your work and it REALLY needs some polish. You nailed the story but need to work on those set pieces and characters details and give the trap a proper cock and a good hair style. Also, have some atmosphere and Im not talking about the sky box behind the school in page 2.
OK this is the first time I've seen your work and it REALLY needs some polish. You nailed the story but need to work on those set pieces and characters details and give the trap a proper cock and a good hair style. Also, have some atmosphere and Im not talking about the sky box behind the school in page 2.
That is not "works" man, it's just trash. Your first upload here dated 2016, you didn't improved a bit since then. Go to psychiatrist, treat your obsession with toilets and urine, then learn how to draw, it is not that hard.