typos fixed (again)
sorry~

Gee, I wonder what this is about.

Base +10, Onthorm +7, yami_zetsu +23, xDefo +8, Lostalgia +6, Zuellni +6, oneiwonder +7, gufalu +6, wuyihao66 +4, yummyfish1 +1

✮ - for color
✮ - for style
✮ - for story
✮ - for title
✮ - for to be continued
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5✮ total
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It could be a fine multi-volume ecchi manga or even anime

Base +12, mickey711 -7, Danjian +6, MaulanaMuhammad +6, Lostalgia +6, sanka_2 -6, Zuellni +6, oneiwonder +7

>23 pages
>535 mb
A real life story about pervert downloading a manga that have same size as a HD hentai video

RAW:http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/1022337/5261a7fb92/

Base +20, 葛の寺 +2, MaulanaMuhammad +6, ZeroDNA +6, oheye +9, DDude8 +14, Ice_Cream +12, bibliomaniac +9, haskerl +5, xDefo +8, Lostalgia +6, oneiwonder +7, tytran +5, and 3 more...

Dat file size tho

Base +7, haskerl +5, Lostalgia +6, oneiwonder +7

Oddly specific title.

Base +7, Egman007 +6, haskerl +5, Lostalgia +6, oneiwonder +7

The art is amazing tho, colors and stuff

Base +6, icekatana8825 -11, void-stealer +6, Lostalgia +6, oneiwonder +7

Title not specific enough
Explain premise further

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Liked it, but what kind of manga would this be? femdom, fetish, only sex or what?

Base +4, icekatana8825 -11, Lostalgia +6, oneiwonder +7

This, my friend, I need to send her. Thank you. Long have I waited. A dominant story without sex that I can send her

Base +5, Slobber +27, Lostalgia +6, oneiwonder +7

mmm. i'd almost be tempted to get this tagged corruption. those 3 panels on pg. 12...

Base +6, icekatana8825 -11, Slobber +27, Lostalgia +6, chanzy +9

葛の寺, if you're fixing mistakes then you should also fix page 10 - Please SHOW me SEE your panties.
So it should be either:Please show me your panties, or: Please let me see your panties.

Also the noun panties is plural, like one says: my panties ARE white/black and not: my panties IS green. So when he begs for it he should say that he wants to see THEM.

Base +5, Slobber +27, Lostalgia +6

+points for colour

Base +1, icekatana8825 -11

@Sanddan ok, thanks

Base +8, icekatana8825 -11, Lostalgia +6

Not worth it. If he hadn't gotten greedy, he might have been able to get her as a girlfriend with a little effort. And then he could have gotten her to *want* to show him her panties. But he was too lazy to put in the work and now their friendship is over and she has no respect for him. Since it's to be continued, they'll presumably have *some* sort of ongoing relationship, but I'm guessing it won't be a happy one.

Base +7, Slobber +27, Lostalgia +6, MysticErotica +6, Zuellni +6, oneiwonder +7, Palaxius -30, chanzy +9

amazing。i dont know what to say

Base +1, Lostalgia +6

Muy buen manga,me encantó

Base +6, Lostalgia +6

I don't know. She went from 0 to 100 in a hurry, I would say the bottle of crazy was already there, he just opened it. And this author seems pretty inconclusive even with sequel books, it's all "lol girls showing panties", even if sequel has sexual content given how much he drags the action it won't be anything special, other than artwise.

Last edited on 04 February 2017, 17:03 UTC.

Base +6, Lostalgia +6, Gloom89 +6, oneiwonder +7, Palaxius +33

Well that was pretty nice.
Can't wait to see what crazy femdom shit she's into in the continuation.

Base +13

Disdain type.

Base +2

Its a fetish I never knew I had.

Base +3