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Free Hentai Manga Gallery: [Cuvie] Splaaaash!! (COMIC Penguin Celeb 2015-09) [English] [CrowKarasu]

[Cuvie] Splaaaash!! (COMIC Penguin Celeb 2015-09) [English] [CrowKarasu]

[Cuvie] Splaaaash!! (COMIC ペンギンセレブ 2015年9月号) [英訳]

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Posted:2016-11-12 22:25
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Language:English  TR
File Size:34.59 MB
Length:24 pages
Favorited:128 times
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Posted on 12 November 2016, 23:31 UTC by:   CrowKarasu     PM
Score +67
Cuvie can draw some cute-ass and hot characters!!
Posted on 13 November 2016, 03:39 UTC by:   ironicname     PM
Score +32
Couple of typos aside, I see nothing egregiously bad about this translation that would get this tagged with "bad grammar."

Your typesetting leaves a lot to be desired, though. If there's one thing you should take away from all this, it's that text centering is your friend.
Posted on 13 November 2016, 04:42 UTC by:   Faeldrin     PM
Score +19
I agree it doesn't deserve the "bad grammar" tag; that said, typos aside, the script feels a little stiff. I'd suspect the translator isn't a native English speaker.

Also some lines are a bit off, example pg. 04: "I want to tickle him / He smells nice"
Pretty sure it's the guy's POV, so it should be more : "I feel ticklish / And there's a nice smell" or something like that. (くすぐったい is an adjective, not a －たい verb according to the dictionary.)

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