another manga i did rewrite couple of weeks ago
hope you enjoy and again feel free to comment negative
and positive insights about it,thank you! :D

For what purpose?

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is there an English version

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There's so much negativity against rewrites but when it's done properly, I think it merits a read with an open mind. This rewrite is pretty good, the only real criticism I have is the too often repeated "Fuck" in the dialogue. I understand that it's being used as sound effects but the non-sensical ooohhs and aaahhs seem more appropriate. If the title didn't say Rewrite on it, I would have accepted this as a direct translation - the script fits well with the artwork.

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Please, don't use my translations for this creepy shit!

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You really should wake up from that coma.

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