The artstyle is great, but there's something that makes me think this isn't exactly fit in the Touhou universe. Banki seriously needs more non-H doujin, though.

The typesetting still needs some work, though. I'm fine with the sound effects are put to the side or aren't translated at all, but with the SFXs do not exactly fit the original font and size while also redundantly imposed over the original SFXs and action scenes, the end result isn't very good. Needs more cleaning too, as I still can see a lot of the original monologue texts.

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Ikr, Rumia looks like that abyss girl

Base +7

Damn son... look that clean and solid artstyle.

Base +6

Rumia has such a split personality disorder among the fandom. Either she's a carefree, human-loving youkai with a big heart, or she's a conniving, human-eating youkai with a big stomach.

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https://www.doujinshi.org/book/782785/Perverse-Cried-1/
RAW: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/803195/33b90c08c4/

Base +47, Frostyvale +5, Bloodwork7125 +6, ranoya +6, AnonimpersonJR +5

This gives me major Tokyo Ghoul vibes.

Base +6