Original Scans: http://g.e-hentai/g/792324/ce2e691bca/

Much better translation. Thank you!

Base +6, BFBK +6

Awww, those goblins babies are so cute!

Thanks for the updated translation.

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This is great work. Thank god somebody knows what they're doing and knows how to do it well. The other version never should have existed in the first place and anybody who was happy with it should probably stick to that version and not read this superior version.

Base +9, Irinheart -6, RedXVII -7, D00IVI -21

Literally this edit would not exist if it wasn't for that translation. Even if the typesetting for the original translation wasn't exactly what I'd call good it's something to be thankful for because other people care enough to see the typesetting improved.

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Which begs the question: why did that version have to exist in the first place? Couldn't we just skip to this and cut out the middleman? It's not like the original translator was striving for self-improvement and it's by pure luck that someone bothered to re-edit the original translation. This was not a collaboration by any means and that's a problem. Do we really have to wade through shit just to get to this point? What happened to people working together to produce a quality product? Original translator just wanted some quick e-peen from scrubs who were willing to provide it (and boy, there sure were a lot of them). To those of you who can't see that truth, please develop some standards for what should and shouldn't be acceptable when it comes to translated comics (porn or otherwise).

Base +9, RedXVII -7, Overl0rd111 +12

This is involving rape and forced impregnation... why do I find it so cute ?

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