Original hoohttps://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=28398921

Translated by anons and typesetted by AGB

Like last time, if corrections appear I'll add them

Those "translation missing" were fixed

I think pages 05 and 21

This doesn't really resonate well. I suppose this can work as flash fiction or smudge, but normally there would be more of a story. Giantess that everyone seems okay with suddenly wants to eat people (no one is aware that she has eaten anyone before nor assume she would given her size). I mean there is no history this character has and suddenly she is okay with it. So I take it this is just a random story where someone out of the blue is a giantess and a cannibal. It is okay as flash fiction, because there isn't any need for background or meaning, but as a genuine story even a fetish story, not so good.

It would be better to have someone from another world transported and doesn't know what a human is and just eat because assume they are just walking food, of course that is also kind of stupid. But... the point is when you are writing something (for the sake of non-flash fiction) you want to put some effort into it, so people can understand what they are looking at. Even porn needs a story and some have very decent stories, although they are a bit repetitive.

Nevertheless, this is fine for flash fiction, so don't think I am chewing up your butt or something, I am just speaking out of advice and criticism that is actually useful.

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I think it started as a request and he kept making pages for it

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the rough drawing is not my style, but I can dig the scenario

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Please, practice drawing after buying a "how to draw manga" book, then draw this story. I'm not trying to be mean, but this is painful to look at.

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The original artist is Japanese on Pixiv, so I don't think direct criticisms (I agree with them) are going to reach.

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This is why the cannibalism course was dropped from the curriculum
But seriously how has nobody arrested her yet? Are they just too afraid?

I'm not a fan giantesses (gigantissi?) but at least he hard vore was good

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