I lost it at "What, no ass sniff for me?" (page 53).

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The only comments here are Bashers so I'm going in. Okay so it's not the best art, but it is manageable. The real thing that's getting me is the story. This is the type of story you'd expect from a written book not a full on comic. I've been following this story for a bit, back when the last page was 119 and we've been passed that mark. So again I say this is not one of those quick fuck and it's over story. This is a deep long going emotional story that seems to be meant for an audience who like these kinds of stories. Plus it also seems like the authors chance of writing their own idea of a good love story. So giving it an honest rating, even though it's not finished, I give it between 7.9~8.3 out of 10. I want to see where this story is going to go.

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very unique art could use some work but i loved the story. all in all 5/5

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I think the art style is very cute! I likes it

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Story is going great. I hope the fathers' can change the mothers' mind about how they feel about their child marrying another race.

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This is why furries creep me out

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Love this comic can't wait for the next one :D keep it up :D

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I actually like this comic it's got good artwork and a really good story

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The art's simple but cute and does the job pretty well.

The writing, on the other hand, alternates between "kinda decent" to "oh my god what were they thinking". Lots of cringe-worthy moments breaking up the flow of an otherwise quite adequate romance.

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#249 last panel "to hold you and to hide you" Never heard it said like that before?

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a good story check good porn check good dialog check bit of humor surprisingly for porn check i have to say decent art and very good story has me coming back to read when it is updated

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I GUESS LOVE COMES IN MANY WAYS

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This is the only comic that I actually keep coming back to check. I really like the story, the art is pretty good, but the story is the best part. Keep it up!

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The third panel on 293 had me dying lmao!

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It's a very unique comic I'll say that .O_ o
Also page 293 @ the 3rd panel made me freaking lose it. XD

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Where is the rest? When is more going to be posted?

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I saw it from the beggining until the end... Please post more of them!!!
I will wait, but not for much... :D

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This is a good story, good art, good porn.... It's all good 5/5

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Art is shit. :L

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When the hell are you gonna have the frigging baby?!

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A great comic, equally hentai and non-h with an incredible story arc.keep it up!

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Why the hell do people keep saying the art is good? It's absolute garbage!

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Welp it like wasn't seeing that from a mile away. That what happen when you screw another pooch.

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Reminds me of Andy Sweetie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6zBTF4INW5g

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...why the fuck do people say the writing is good? "The Story Of How I Married My Hot Dog Coworker Also I'm Secretly Rich And Nothing Ever Goes Wrong For Me Sometimes Featuring Melodrama From Other People (Who Aren't Me)"

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78 pages before the foreshadowed "not the best thing" happens. I had to take several breaks to read The Art of War to get that far.

Way too upbeat for way too long. The author is trying to develop a decent, not rushed relationship, but there are a lot of issues in how;
1. Literally every other character is more interesting than the protagonists, who seem to be flawless.
2. The way "furry peoples" are implemented is inconsistent, and they seem to be randomly recreated to fit the plot.
3. Without constant sex, this'd be exceedingly bland. With that, it is merely very bland.
4. If characters have a vacation to an island coming up and the opportunity is that ripe, not making a Sinatra reference to "Come Fly With Me" should be criminal.
5. The pacing is wonky. It goes slowly and then at a much faster pace. When you read "The Three Musketeers" or "The Count of Monte Christo", the pacing changes because the action changes. Shit is getting real when they go from using a whole chapter to call a character fat to killing three people in a paragraph. Here, more things are happening, but they're not really different things. If they are it's pertaining to side characters, and then the scene is over too soon. I cannot stress that first point enough.
6. Always write your stories during the most interesting part of the protagonist's life. We see lots of hinting that she had a troubled and conflicted past, but then are shunted back to a conflict-free (and thus tension free) story about someone whose life is perfect. No one cares about characters who don't experience hardship.

People's favorite characters are those that overcome adversity. Those that struggle, be it mentally, emotionally or physically, and fight. They don't always have to win. Look at how well-made horror works. You care about the protagonist, so every fear stricken moment, every visceral attack hits hard. In Ben Hur, two of the characters are sealed inside a dungeon. They've sacrificed to get to a decent spot in life, but were then wrongfully incarcerated. They get sealed in a room with no light, and the story cuts back to them praying every so often. When they contract leprousy, you feel like shouting in outrage. As they slowly decay, they don't give up hope, and cling to the thought of rescue. They fight against impossible odds, and try to retain their sanity as their skin erodes away.

That's certainly an extreme way to catch attention, but it worked. The author then puts in something of a twist that forces the reader to reflect on their outrage.

Ben Hur's a great read by the way, even if it has a few "be Christian" bits in it. But by volume they're hardly there.

But I digress.

You do tolerable art.
You can write decent characters.
You have formatting down.
You can worldbuild.

Put them together and make something good.

Last edited on 22 February 2016, 06:47 UTC.

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@Tungsten Seraph I'm again going to contest the "decent art" point. It's bobbleheads and needlenoses. That's not even mediocre.

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@Mac

Fixed.

There's room for improvement there as well but I'm not as apt at giving advice on graphics. I have some sorta psychological problem where art and me suggesting things meet.

It involves a lot of me screaming.

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art isnt great but very slice of life and i love the story.......im a sucker for mushy romance

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Finally, a porn/story artist who can use grammar and English properly! I love this story. So far I'm on 176.

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