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Free Hentai Western Gallery: [Zenia] Tina's Story [Ongoing]

[Zenia] Tina's Story [Ongoing]

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Posted:2016-06-06 01:23
Parent:933870
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:124.6 MB
Length:387 pages
Favorited:206 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.96

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Posted on 04 September 2014, 16:54 UTC by:   darkclaw422     PM
Score +20
I lost it at "What, no ass sniff for me?" (page 53).
Posted on 08 October 2014, 06:35 UTC by:   mockingbird12     PM
Score +118
The only comments here are Bashers so I'm going in. Okay so it's not the best art, but it is manageable. The real thing that's getting me is the story. This is the type of story you'd expect from a written book not a full on comic. I've been following this story for a bit, back when the last page was 119 and we've been passed that mark. So again I say this is not one of those quick fuck and it's over story. This is a deep long going emotional story that seems to be meant for an audience who like these kinds of stories. Plus it also seems like the authors chance of writing their own idea of a good love story. So giving it an honest rating, even though it's not finished, I give it between 7.9~8.3 out of 10. I want to see where this story is going to go.
Posted on 14 October 2014, 22:19 UTC by:   shadowmist18     PM
Score +10
very unique art could use some work but i loved the story. all in all 5/5
Posted on 15 October 2014, 02:50 UTC by:   leowolf     PM
Score +5
I think the art style is very cute! I likes it
Posted on 15 October 2014, 20:56 UTC by:   Maxsteele     PM
Score +11
Story is going great. I hope the fathers' can change the mothers' mind about how they feel about their child marrying another race.
Posted on 26 October 2014, 08:02 UTC by:   furclubb     PM
Score +57
This is why furries creep me out
Posted on 09 December 2014, 22:59 UTC by:   Master Proton     PM
Score +6
Love this comic can't wait for the next one :D keep it up :D
Posted on 14 January 2015, 20:18 UTC by:   Master Proton     PM
Score -9
I actually like this comic it's got good artwork and a really good story
Posted on 21 January 2015, 21:07 UTC by:   MSTGMA     PM
Score +17
The art's simple but cute and does the job pretty well.

The writing, on the other hand, alternates between "kinda decent" to "oh my god what were they thinking". Lots of cringe-worthy moments breaking up the flow of an otherwise quite adequate romance.
Posted on 31 January 2015, 09:38 UTC by:   hoks     PM
Score -5
#249 last panel "to hold you and to hide you" Never heard it said like that before?
Posted on 22 February 2015, 08:56 UTC by:   TheEternalNight     PM
Score -10
a good story check good porn check good dialog check bit of humor surprisingly for porn check i have to say decent art and very good story has me coming back to read when it is updated
Posted on 04 June 2015, 14:30 UTC by:   FIREBALL1853     PM
Score -1
I GUESS LOVE COMES IN MANY WAYS
Posted on 07 July 2015, 05:09 UTC by:   Tymothy     PM
Score -11
This is the only comic that I actually keep coming back to check. I really like the story, the art is pretty good, but the story is the best part. Keep it up!
Posted on 20 August 2015, 10:06 UTC by:   babyt64     PM
Score -9
The third panel on 293 had me dying lmao!
Posted on 02 September 2015, 05:39 UTC by:   m3d 2u     PM
Score -5
It's a very unique comic I'll say that .O_ o
Also page 293 @ the 3rd panel made me freaking lose it. XD
Posted on 19 September 2015, 19:25 UTC by:   userman1991     PM
Score -4
Where is the rest? When is more going to be posted?
Posted on 27 September 2015, 00:34 UTC by:   Cheesers     PM
Score -6
I saw it from the beggining until the end... Please post more of them!!!
I will wait, but not for much... :D
Posted on 08 October 2015, 17:53 UTC by:   no-vaca     PM
Score -20
This is a good story, good art, good porn.... It's all good 5/5
Posted on 04 January 2016, 02:26 UTC by:   FarkyMac     PM
Score +15
Art is shit. :L
Posted on 13 January 2016, 07:57 UTC by:   vorkken     PM
Score +4
When the hell are you gonna have the frigging baby?!
Posted on 22 January 2016, 21:21 UTC by:   Gabs999     PM
Score -10
A great comic, equally hentai and non-h with an incredible story arc.keep it up!
Posted on 26 January 2016, 17:04 UTC by:   FarkyMac     PM
Score +22
Why the hell do people keep saying the art is good? It's absolute garbage!
Posted on 09 February 2016, 01:26 UTC by:   Kibanekowolfboy     PM
Score +7
Welp it like wasn't seeing that from a mile away. That what happen when you screw another pooch.
Posted on 09 February 2016, 05:41 UTC by:   ozymandiaspoem     PM
Score +13
Reminds me of Andy Sweetie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6zBTF4INW5g
Posted on 20 February 2016, 19:54 UTC by:   MrFinkel     PM
Score +21
...why the fuck do people say the writing is good? "The Story Of How I Married My Hot Dog Coworker Also I'm Secretly Rich And Nothing Ever Goes Wrong For Me Sometimes Featuring Melodrama From Other People (Who Aren't Me)"
Posted on 21 February 2016, 10:15 UTC by:   Tungsten Seraph     PM
Score +13
78 pages before the foreshadowed "not the best thing" happens. I had to take several breaks to read The Art of War to get that far.

Way too upbeat for way too long. The author is trying to develop a decent, not rushed relationship, but there are a lot of issues in how;
1. Literally every other character is more interesting than the protagonists, who seem to be flawless.
2. The way "furry peoples" are implemented is inconsistent, and they seem to be randomly recreated to fit the plot.
3. Without constant sex, this'd be exceedingly bland. With that, it is merely very bland.
4. If characters have a vacation to an island coming up and the opportunity is that ripe, not making a Sinatra reference to "Come Fly With Me" should be criminal.
5. The pacing is wonky. It goes slowly and then at a much faster pace. When you read "The Three Musketeers" or "The Count of Monte Christo", the pacing changes because the action changes. Shit is getting real when they go from using a whole chapter to call a character fat to killing three people in a paragraph. Here, more things are happening, but they're not really different things. If they are it's pertaining to side characters, and then the scene is over too soon. I cannot stress that first point enough.
6. Always write your stories during the most interesting part of the protagonist's life. We see lots of hinting that she had a troubled and conflicted past, but then are shunted back to a conflict-free (and thus tension free) story about someone whose life is perfect. No one cares about characters who don't experience hardship.

People's favorite characters are those that overcome adversity. Those that struggle, be it mentally, emotionally or physically, and fight. They don't always have to win. Look at how well-made horror works. You care about the protagonist, so every fear stricken moment, every visceral attack hits hard. In Ben Hur, two of the characters are sealed inside a dungeon. They've sacrificed to get to a decent spot in life, but were then wrongfully incarcerated. They get sealed in a room with no light, and the story cuts back to them praying every so often. When they contract leprousy, you feel like shouting in outrage. As they slowly decay, they don't give up hope, and cling to the thought of rescue. They fight against impossible odds, and try to retain their sanity as their skin erodes away.

That's certainly an extreme way to catch attention, but it worked. The author then puts in something of a twist that forces the reader to reflect on their outrage.

Ben Hur's a great read by the way, even if it has a few "be Christian" bits in it. But by volume they're hardly there.

But I digress.

You do tolerable art.
You can write decent characters.
You have formatting down.
You can worldbuild.

Put them together and make something good.
Last edited on 22 February 2016, 06:47 UTC.
Posted on 22 February 2016, 04:22 UTC by:   FarkyMac     PM
Score +12
@Tungsten Seraph I'm again going to contest the "decent art" point. It's bobbleheads and needlenoses. That's not even mediocre.
Posted on 22 February 2016, 07:02 UTC by:   Tungsten Seraph     PM
Score +11
@Mac

Fixed.

There's room for improvement there as well but I'm not as apt at giving advice on graphics. I have some sorta psychological problem where art and me suggesting things meet.

It involves a lot of me screaming.
Posted on 22 February 2016, 18:27 UTC by:   hammergunner     PM
Score +6
art isnt great but very slice of life and i love the story.......im a sucker for mushy romance
Posted on 04 March 2016, 04:57 UTC by:   EnderNutt     PM
Score +2
Finally, a porn/story artist who can use grammar and English properly! I love this story. So far I'm on 176.

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