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valdam
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Probably should have left it untranslated...

I mean I can't help but imagine two gay autists while reading this.

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Though the art is kinda nice...

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Simonsayzhigh //
That mean is , your comments, translating is useless or have some error like inapproptiate sentences in translating.
I confuse because of comments meaning.

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Valdam

The English is wrong pretty much every time, it would be better without the incorrect English.

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Rezzlo

Thanks for your reply.
By the way, can you tell me correct one? If you dont mind. It can be very helpful for me.

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Not gonna go into every example here, but some representative issues:

improper conjugation:

Pg. 3: Because the guy found something in the past, you should use the past tense "found" and not the present tense "find".

Pg. 4: See above. The past-tense "found" should be used in place of the present-tense "find"

Pg. 5: "Make strange smell" is incorrect for multiple reasons. First, if you wanted to use that phrasing, it would have to be conjugated as "making a strange smell". However, in English, we do not refer to things as "making a smell"; we instead will either say that they "smell" or that they "emit" a smell. Therefore, this sentence should probably be rendered as "It's very hard and it's emitting a strange smell". Note that "emitting" is in the present continuous form, because the dick is continuously emitting the smell as the speaker is speaking (God, that's a sentence I never thought I would have to write).

Unnatural phrasing:

This doesn't fall neatly into any category of grammatical correctness, because it usually occurs in situations where the natural-sounding English will be technically incorrect, like sentence fragments. Some sentence fragments sound "natural" to an English speaker and others don't. There's not a lot you can do to get better at this apart from spending a lot of time reading things in English

Pg. 3: "Maybe your deep secret" sounds unnatural. I would translate it as something like "Looks like you've got a secret" or something similar.

Improper article usage:

Articles ("a", "an", "the", "some") are tough for Koreans, Chinese, and Japanese-speakers because they don't exist in those languages.

The rule is that if the speaker is referring to a particular object, you use the definite article "the", and if the speaker is not referring to a specific object, you use "a", "an", or sometimes no article.

Pg. 4: There should be the indefinite article "a" before "strange mark".

Pg. 6: The indefinite article "a" should be used before "woman", and the definite article "the" should be used before "school bathroom"

That's about all I have the patience/interest in pointing out right now. The ones I mentioned are far from the only errors you made, but they are representative of the most common problems I saw in your English.

Edit: As an addendum, there is a "rule" followed by many English-speaking translators: "Only translate into your native language." Translations such as this one are one of the reasons why its a good idea to follow that rule.

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fieuponyou

Thanks!

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