A middle aged man gains mind control powers and builds himself a harem

Yes a nice one to get translated.

Base +6

Is there any better kind of buffet?

Base +7

There are a few problems with your release:
- a few typos (like on pg 10, "talke" -> "talk" and "remeber" -> "remember"),
- font choice is readable but not great,
- you're missing a whole bubble on pg 21,
- actually, you're missing the whole introduction page (that one: /g-hentai/?s=4fc4e6247c/523483-2) ,
- some bubbles look like they haven't been cleaned well (example on pg 6, bottom right bubble)
- at least capitalize the first letter of your sentences, please.

Not trying to bash you here, just that this could really use a second editing pass. The dialogue itself sounded good, you could have a quality release if you fixed those little things.

Base +11, Vanguard3125 +6, Lostalgia +6, MetalGarv +14, shinangels +18