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Free Hentai Doujinshi Gallery: (C88) [Kurosawa pict (Kurosawa Kiyotaka)] Tomori Uni (Charlotte) [English] [dvinrtribution]

(C88) [Kurosawa pict (Kurosawa Kiyotaka)] Tomori Uni (Charlotte) [English] [dvinrtribution]

(C88) [黒澤pict (黒澤清崇)] 友利ユニ (シャーロット) [英訳]

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Posted:2016-01-02 07:43
Parent:889368
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Language:English  TR
File Size:18.54 MB
Length:26 pages
Favorited:39 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.17

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Posted on 02 January 2016, 07:43 UTC by:   dvinrtribution     PM
Uploader Comment
First out of four releases for Charlotte. I wanted to do them all but don't have time unfortunately. I tried to do what I thought the are best. Please let me know if I made any mistakes. I'm a one man army so you guys are my QC.

I like the forcefulness of this one as well as the anal.
Posted on 02 January 2016, 04:38 UTC by:   Mitsukai123     PM
Score +14
Thanks a bunch for this!

Edit: Just finally got around to checking this out. The Chinese translation (found here: http://dl.hentaiknight.work/?l=e-hentai/g/853066/49a66428b6/) has much higher quality scans; not sure if maybe you want to replace these with those? I think the person who scanned/uploaded the Japanese raw was a different person than the one who scanned the pages that would later be used for the Chinese translation.
Last edited on 02 January 2016, 10:54 UTC.
Posted on 02 January 2016, 04:54 UTC by:   Xsidius     PM
Score +27
pg. 4 "Soesn't" should be "Doesn't"

pg. 5 "Its not like I care" should be "It's..." and "Now please uuse..." should be "use"

pg. 10 I think you missed a few speech bubbles here (unless it's just sound effects)

pg. 12 "Want's" should be "Wants"

pg. 14 I've seen it spelled as "cumming" more so than "cuming"

pg. 15 "Ill put in deep" should probably be "I'll put it in deep"

pg. 18 "That's imposible" should be "That's impossible"

pgs. 21-22 Was this also just sound effects?

Mostly just spelling errors; I'm curious about the punctuation on some of the dialogue, but I'm not here to critique a free translation, so thank you.
Posted on 02 January 2016, 07:56 UTC by:   dvinrtribution     PM
Score +8
Thank you Xsidius

I thought I forgot to spell a page or two not half of them.
English has never been one of my strong points as you can tell.

I should have corrected everything you said.
The bubbles on the top of page ten is steam I guess. They are blank in the original.
Pages 21 and 22 is heavy breathing or the like.
The big one on 21 is "Kua" and the bottom of 22 is top "kaha" and bottom "ha".

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