Translated by me. Commissioned by anonymous.

crayzayj.blogspot.com

Update: Chapter 4 added, sorry for long wait, I've had personal shit to deal with. I just need to edit the pages for the last few chapter and then they're done. I'm gonna try get them out before christmas.

Update: I worked hard on these pages to get them finished really fast, and have finally finished this interesting series. There are no further chapters after this, and the artist has since disappeared off the internet. Hope you all enjoyed it, and I hope it was worth the wait.

@wongsaraf
It does become netorare later on, somebody probably took the tag from the raws of the complete chapters.

Base +7, Cy48 +6, plester +6, stupid army +7, googletimes +6, Bio-Hazard -5, Dividedbyzero -10, zinos6 +8, rjimenez666 +5

pwahaha, oh man, that poor guy sure has it rough, his sister has a bigger dick than him. And to top it off his girlfriend is stolen by his sister as well XD

Base +7, Dividedbyzero -10, HamburgerHelper +5, stupid army +7, Azura Meta +6, CM1T +6, b1ge11 +4, HodorHodor +7, skenverus +6, Bio-Hazard -5, fillin +6, rjimenez666 +5, dukenukem3d +6

c89 will have the complete, + extra story.

Base +10, stupid army +7, jrdp_18 +7, Bio-Hazard -5

Does this have such a low rating because of the translation or the story? I've been noticing this place is ending up more and more like fakku with people giving anything they don't like low stars.

Base +6, e6000 +8, CM1T +6, Raift +6, MenaceZero +7, TheBrojangles +4, Yosshh +6, 9solid8 +5, genyatus +7, tcvds +6, Orion9137 +10, amt -7, skenverus +6, and 15 more...

Some people are like that, personally I only give a low rating if the translation is very bad, or if the art is very poor, and then only if bad aren't isn't a intentional part of the aesthetic.

Base +6, jarfjarb +5, 9solid8 +5, Tawg +6, genyatus +7, stupid army +7, dukenukem3d +6

For some, the low rating may reflect the story, it is pretty stupid and essentially boils down to 'my dick is bigger than my brothers, so I'll rape his girlfriend'

Base +14, CM1T -6, Beane +7, b1ge11 +4, Djiimon +5, Machiga -6, Randomguy664 +11, Tiru -6, Shiro-Yasha +6, greenpeon +8, rediat -5, Circle0Trick +4, Jstar229 +6, and 18 more...

story is bomb. you guys are high. best thing to come out in the last week

Base +6, e6000 +8, CM1T +6, Tiru +6, Shiro-Yasha -6, rorikon69 +5, amt -7, Bio-Hazard -5, rjimenez666 +5, Victor DoUrden -13, isno -6

This isn't really NTR at this point, it's just rape

Base +6, Bio-Hazard -5, stupid army -7, coloaaider +7, Victor DoUrden +13, isno +6

I didn't know that raping a girl is the best way to conquer her and make her feel in love for you, also, raw fucking a virgin girl must be reaaaaaly enjoyable, huh? well, that the manga sense for you, yep!

Base +6, rjimenez666 -5, isno +6

This got sinister quickly.

EDIT

I do hope she snaps out of it though, rather than leave on a sour, cum stained note, family in ruins and such.

Base +2, Circle0Trick +4, genyatus -7, Victor DoUrden +13, isno +6

Chapter 1 of 3 eh? Ohohohoho this going to be good. If all goes well maybe she'll bang the brother as well ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Hits all the right spots now doesn't it? We've got yandere as well

Base +7, Bio-Hazard -5, Victor DoUrden -13

Well that escalated quickly.

Base +6, rjimenez666 +5

@CrayZayJay I'm sorry to bother you but I would like to know if you are going to release the remaining chapters soon. :) I really like this story.

Base +5, CM1T +6, skydragon91 +6, Bio-Hazard -5

@zpcielite1 Nope, family in ruins and such is exactly where this finishes up.

@Woodensword255 Sadly, I'm afraid you'll be disappointed on that front.

Base +7, Raift +8, rjimenez666 +5

What happened to the author Pixiv?

Is there other website.

Base +7, stupid army +7

"Gallery ratings are a subjective gallery scoring system, based on user input, that values a gallery's worth on a scale from 0.5 to 5 stars. "

People can rate for any reason whatsoever. Stop bitching and accept it.

Base +7, amt +7, Bio-Hazard +5, ShAmMz0r -6, stupid army -7, rjimenez666 -5, yaoi32 -6, Kuro Yuuki -5, Ulthael -4, cochrane +9, genyatus -7, war15 +8, xx195x -7, and 3 more...

@nowittycomment

Wrong timing for your reply, and your post looks like the one that comes as bitching.

Last edited on 23 December 2015, 02:31 UTC.

Base +7, Bio-Hazard -5, stupid army +7, rjimenez666 +5, yaoi32 +6, Kuro Yuuki +5, war15 -8, amt -7

Not sure if she counts as a yandere since she only seems to want to fuck her brother's girlfriend as a means to humiliate him. Considering how good she felt when he got angry at her. If he loved another girl I'm positive she would go after that one instead. She's more of a sadist.

Base +6

Thanks so much,i'm looking forward to more of this. I mean,damn,I'm not into rape hentai but it's very refreshing to see a futa girl being a complete bitch than it always being some fat dude. 5 stars,awaiting the rest!

Base +2

@Wilfriback I have no idea, seems they deleted their pixiv. I tried to find their site or twitter but no luck there.

NP ayazumi, glad you like it. I'm powering through these pages at a faster pace than expected. I should have the whole thing translated within next 12 or so hours, so keep an eye out.

Base +8, Kuro Yuuki +5

Wow an update, I check religiously everyday, great work!! thanks for chapter 4

Last edited on 23 December 2015, 08:30 UTC.

Base +5, stupid army +7

The brother was nice to her sister and in turn she is a dick to him(no pun intended).

The story was somewhat hood but the author screwed bad by making the brother have an absurdly small dick, a normal one would have worked better with the sister being futa with her massive size.

Also how the girlfriend went from guilt to bitch was forced.

@CrayZayJay
Thanks for your work, I already commented on the story.

Base +7, undefinedghost +6, Plutonio -6, coloaaider +7

You know, I have read plenty of netorare works and I love them. But this is the first time that I wanted the MC to kill the one who steal the girl, I mean how much of an asshole you must be to the only person that really loves you.

Base +6, Plutonio -6

I usually am disgusted by netorare stories, but, oh man! this one was hilarious! the poor guy is so pathetic XD...

Base +8, PiePriate +6, waltergeist -8, CM1T +6

And thus,it ends. This was incredible!

Base +2

Listen I don't like this story, I think the hero as a waste, make me feel mad, I don't think male leading role should be able to tolerate his girlfriend by his sister fuck,He should have killed his girlfriend and her sister

Base +5, skenverus -6, Kaya Amaya -2, kenabrxg +5

wow that little sister, talk about returning her big brother's kindness to him, like wow.

Base +9, isno +6

I think the male's behavior was a bit over the top, in a cartoonie way. Heck, the entire doujin is over the top...Are we supposed to laugh?
Comical behavior in NTR, pft. I feel like I saw stranger things, like dolphins having vore sex with orca-whales, but comical-NTR has to be up there on the strange scale.

....
And now I have orca-dolphin-vore-sex stuck in my head, great.

Base +6, isno +6, Master M +6

PogChamp Kreygasm

Base +6

@tranlator/poster THANK YOU :D

Base +6, CM1T +6

Readed till page 2 then dropped.
kek, read the tags, fag - is what i tell myself.
came for ntr actually.

Base +10, CM1T -6, Cy48 -6, xXMauzam_8900Xx -6

hey the brother can get himself a growth hormones for his dick or get operation or get revenge on his sister by cutting her dick offf or send people to fuck her off etc

Base +12, CM1T -6

Looks like a hentai for feminists again. What is with women these days?

Base +6, faggotop +6, kenrou -6, Master M +6

Stories like this are super dumb. Having a big dick really isn't that life changing. In fact you have to be extra careful during sex because you can hurt your partner, a LOT of women have cried from penetrating too deep too fast.
I wanna see a NTR where the person who steals the girl is a super good-looking person with a good job and an average sized dick. And she chooses him over her husband/lover with a big dick and shit job. ~_~

Base +6