A better formated version of the previously uploaded translation. File size is now 1/3 of the original.

What's wrong with jpg?

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Pg. 7
WTF Y is Gaben in that mag?

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@face1355
Because it's some dumb running theme of this translator to insert Gaben into things for no reason but laughs.

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Hahahahaha WTF is Gaben x')

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@asphexor
PNG here: http://e-hentai.fbk.tokyo/index/g/875032/7a06dbb886/

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damn! Gaben break the atmosphere D: hahahaha xD

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Quick edits:

Pg.1 (last box) ...someone familiar by waiting by... --> ....someone familiar waiting by...
Pg.5 (mid box) ...it's on fair of problems --> it's own fair of problems
Pg.13 (mid box) Were no one else... --> Where no one else...

Overall, you could've used a bit more commas.

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Once I saw that Gaben photo and the clearly obvious Fallout NV, I couldnt take the doujin seriously anymore.
Nonetheless, the story itself was nice. The brothers dilemma really sounds believable

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Nice, now we need another part with the neighbor kid.

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All hail Gaben.

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