An adaptation made by Biberoi of the first anime La Noche de Walpurgis in comic style

With all due respect, but isn't this a bit pointless? If we wanted to read the story, we would play the visual novel, and if we wanted more than just a few still shots, we could watch the awesome ovas, from which this comic is drawing images. They are both in english and it shouldn't be too hard to get them. Also, the pace of this comic is too fast, and the scenes are too short. I cannot see the purpouse of this comic or the reasons why it's creator would want to make it. I t doesn't add anything to the table, it's actually worse than the other media where this story is available.

But whatever, if the creator is happy, the he or she can do what they want. I just hope their expectations regarding the public reception of this work aren't too high...

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Is it just me or is this comic severely censored compared to the other versions? I think Kitami's dick is the only sexual content in the entire thing.

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@xenoguy

Usually projects like this are mostly the creator themselves learning how to compile something together. Like example Biberoi probably learned a great deal of how panels can be used to tell the story and show different perspectives. Then speech bubble creations and trying to fit the perfect amount of text on them. When their little test project doesn't turn out too bad they share it on the net with others who might want to have a look at it.

I have myself created some stuff in a similar fashion for purpose of learning that I didn't personally feel was much up to scratch with already available content. Stuff like that then would be left or deleted eventually to never see the light of day. If the stuff does get posted on the net then I would usually be looking constructive criticism.

My constructive criticism on this, I personally I would suggest to broaden the focus on the sexual content more seeing as that is the main device of the story being a hentai and all. The scene with the teacher and student should have been longer. It felt very montage for a hot scene. The part alone the teacher unclipping her suspender then playing with her plump breast was a awesome scene and could have used more panels to show some of the in between footage there. Using that as an example, the other content upcoming should certainly have that aspect reviewed when being converted to comic form.

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