Revised translation by Otokonoko (tentative).

Take your time reading and enjoy.

What now , he let it spiraled outta Control, he had till the train car chapter to stop this but now.....
this is turning out to be Dark , did his wife truly ,truly ,truly moved on with this Man ,I don't know he just seemed Too perfect....this might go dark

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I'm calling it now, Haruka is going to get rekt for being such a bitch, and sempai still being a salty again about all this.

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https://ouo.io/sIF14v

Please make it happen

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No idea where this is going I don't feel anything from it I just wanna finish it.

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He probably just stabbed himself.

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This has got to be the first time I've ever actually felt something emotional from NTR. Don't get me wrong, I'm still fapping.

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A small very very VERY small part of me is hoping that Shu will some how turn this around in the end; the sole reason is cause i really cant stand the Senpai and his cocky ass looks and shit. However knowing how pathetic Shu is, he'll probably have the most pathetic end to this situation.

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I really hope Shu gets his shit together. I was kind of rooting for the senpai at first, but now I just feel really bad for Shu. He brought this unto himself, but man this situation is just a real downer. He was going to go tell his wife how much he loved her and maybe he was gonna change, but then he gets greeted with divorce papers.

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This shit is getting good. When is the next issue comimg out I have to know. The curse will begin to take effect now. I bet senpai will start getting ed soon after this and no doubt people will start talking behind harukas back and giving her glares of disgust after this is all said and done. Japan pretty big on that I believe especially now that shu probably stabbed himself or committed suicide. A couple stabs to the gut should be enough for a guy like him.

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You know, usually you just see people saying "This is fucking hot!" or something similar for most NTR stories. Not so much for this one. Those people actually appear to be affected by this story.

Maybe this one, in particular, hits a bit close to home?

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1st off I know shuu is fucked up for letting any of this happen in the first place, but I still hate that sempai 100000000x more because it's not even like he treats her the way he should, he just the kind of cocky asshole I hate, I think that's why this story affects so many people because it isn't stupid ntr where the mc's girl gets raped/stolen it's much more personal, he makes mistakes and sempai takes advantage of a clearly mind fucked haruka, rather than just 'my dicks bigger she's mine now, it's more emotional than physical and that's what makes it hurt...

2nd IS THERE ANY VANILLA POWERFUL ENOUGH TO NEUTRALIZE NTR OF THIS POWER?!?!?

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Hmm this version makes shuu more miserable or rather situation is more miserable, dem feels.

@xshadowsunx, not even barry white could help here, unless haruka is faking everything, by everything i mean what has been said in this chapter and what she has done in order to break shuu even more to the point where he will snap and do something wrong or.... i dont know :p harukas actions as of now are that of a typical ntr heroine where they became crazed about cock, any cock, and because of that i can't see happy ending for this story even though i really want it to happen.

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good lord, I don't even wanna read the rest of this... how the hell does someone get to this point?

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when is chapter 20 coming and does someone know a similair manga?

when is chapter 20 coming and does someone know a similair manga as this one?

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Let me share some of my thoughts regarding the situation. It may look very bleak for Shu, but there's still hope for him. Not so much for Haruka, though.

Netoraserare will run for around 8 chapters after this. Shu hit his absolute low point here, it's almost impossible to break him further, and definitely not for 8 chapters.
On top of that, he has several tools in his hands to make Haruka miserable if he wants to and be happy himself:

-Kawai is in love with him. She has shown more love and compassion towards Shu in this chapter than Haruka did in the entire series. She even said "I love you", which is something that Haruka never did. All Shu got after confessing his love to Haruka was a "Thank you" or "I'm happy" after he proposed to her. Kawai can help him heal from this trauma and give him security. She was introduced in one of the first chapters and even got color pages at the beginning of volume 3, so she will definitely play a vital role from here on out.

-Haruka has no job, friends or money of her own. Once Senpai dumps her, she's helpless. She always relied on Shu for her entire life and that will bite her in the ass.

-Shu can leak the sex tapes of Haruka and Senpai to humiliate her, especially sending them to their parents. They will reject and despise her for what she did.

-Eventually, he can reverse the roles and let Haruka watch him and Kawai have sex without ED. I always assumed that was a problem caused from his inferiority complex because of Haruka and Senpai dating in High School and keeping him in the dark about it. The doctor in chapter 2 said he's actually fine in the physical department after all, so he shouldn't have that many problems having sex with other girls than Haruka. I want to see the funny faces she will make then.

In contrast, what does Haruka have?
-Senpai's big gigolo dick. That's it.
And he will dump her on the spot once he gets cucked by random dudes since she's addicted to sex now. She doesn't care who will fuck her, she just wants to feel pleasure.

I definitely think that it will be Haruka that gets NTR' ed in the end. Not because of the power of blackmail, rape or big dicks, but because of the love that Kawai can give to Shu. Something that she was never able to do.

Essentially, the story would split in two from here on out: One side is Shu healing and hooking up with Kawai, realizing how much more she loves him than Haruka ever did, the other one is Haruka having empty sex with Senpai and other dudes, slowly realizing what a whore she became. She will try to get back to Shu, but it will be too late for her, like the chapter name implies.

In the end, Haruka may become a prostitute, while Shu marries Kawai.

Also, I'll share two strawpolls for Shu and Haruka here.

Shu:
https://ouo.io/P4enJP

Haruka:
http://www.rqq.co/BhvUW

Last edited on 17 August 2015, 05:04 UTC.

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Guys i'm telling you now. Kill all hope for this story and do not invest your emotions in it or else you will be rekt for weeks when the ending is not what you want. You will be limp for a few days afterwards also.

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@Vivi1993, I think your assumption that it's impossible to break Shu further is wrong, even for 8 chapters. Here's one way:

1. Build the relationship between Shu and Kawai further.
2. NTR Shu a second time through Kawai (e.g. Senpai fucks her too, maybe even gets a threesome from Kawai and Haruka).

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@backpr Kawai doesn't feel anything for Senpai and has no relation to him, unlike Haruka. And unlike Haruka, she genuinely loves Shu and even said "I would never absolutely make you feel like that", especially not with the douchebag his wife already had an affair with.

Remember what Haruka said about having an affair? "You shouldn't be mad about that." Kawai is the total opposite in that regard.

Last edited on 17 August 2015, 12:20 UTC.

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Translator messed up again and it was a big one. He's gotta post the edited pages.

That Kawai isn't the only one who thinks it's "disgusting".
What happens is that Kawai tells Shu that she would never sleep with another man if he asked her. Shu realizes that she is not an option because of this, that his wife is all he has.

A literal translation is "That's why there is noone for me but my wife".

>She's not taking about Shuu stopping it.
She is talking about Shu not stopping it. This is the only possible interpretation because it's 私を, not 私が (you never get angry AT ME, you never try to stop ME). She is upset because she is trying to goad some sort of reaction from him as proof that he loves her, but he always remains passive.

>I believe senpai is really saying whatever love she had for Shuu, not the other way around, is gone/nonexistent/dead.
It has to be Shu's love for Haruka, because it says 春ちゃんへの愛. Notice the へ, the love TOWARDS Haru-chan.

In the previous page Haruka was upset because nothing in Shu's actions indicated to her that he loved her. Shu just stares and doesn't say anything in response. Senpai then tries to reinforce this, "see, I told you, he has no love for you".

>the way the line was written didn't specify anyone as the source of Haruka's unhappiness.
It says お前は春ちゃんを. Notice the を, omae (Shu) is specified as making Haruchan miserable.

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Yes, I embarrassing missed some stuff. I have someone else looking over the translation to fix the errors. As soon as that's done I'll update the pages here.

-Otokonoko

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@Vivi1993 Fair points. However I still think it might be doable in the longer term.

> And unlike Haruka, she genuinely loves Shu and even said "I would never absolutely make you feel like that"

Exactly. At a time when Shu knew that his wife it worthless compared to Kawai who he might see as pure, Kawai doing something like that would break Shu even further. I think this is a possibility since Kawai seems so naive, the type that can be easily manipulated and mindbroken in the hentai world. Senpai seems to be the traditional predator type.

Well, I'm speculating. I'd personally want it to go your way, it would be refreshing.

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this story is like horriblesubs - so bad yet so good.
I feel so sorry for both of them, really

Last edited on 18 August 2015, 23:04 UTC.

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@Otokono

hi^^ ,

There is chap 19 V3 will out nextly?

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@playmobil and everyone else:

Waiting to hear back from my partner-in-crime.

I sent him a "final" version to go over before I re-upload it; I'm hoping he gets back to me soon.

I think it's ready to go as-is but I want to ensure that there's no more hiccups with this chapter.

It's gonna change some dialogue back to how I originally translated it more or less but it'll sound more "natural" for ENG speakers.
Also with the context of the chapter cleared-up it's gonna effect the translation quite a bit. (For the "better" I hope.)

If Sands is IMA before the end of today (central time) I'll go ahead and post the V3 update.
(I'm sure he's busy and I already have the corrections placed as suggested; just requesting his pair of eyes to review V3 before it's uleashed.)

Thank you for putting up with me.

-GGXXRE
(Formerly "Otokonoko".)

Okay guys, V3 is up! Enjoy.

Last edited on 22 August 2015, 19:26 UTC.

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This is pure comedy gold.

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Don't mind me. I'm just here for the comments.

Good to know that there are so many sound of reason among us when we discuss a hentai plot. I'd like to brofist many of you awesome people.

IMO, this kind of story makes people contemplating their life choices. For that I'd like to congratulate the artist. Though the arc may still incomplete, certainly the message is delivered.

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Regarding breaking shu even further, those who said that it's possible by using kawai and that she is the type that could fall easily for senpai and his big dick because reasons, are spot on and exactly what i had in mind the chances for that are pretty high. At this point manga could stray even further into dark and show shuu trying to commit suicide and either it failed because again reasons or you know what. Honestly whenever i see update for this manga and even when not i'm always thinking something along the lines: "I really wonder how it will progress this/next time".

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well I just want to make notice, that in the two first panels at the 14th page, is obvious that she LOVE when shuu is watching, so, even if shuu and haruka stays together, haruka already changed, she likes to get drill for other men's penis (it think it doesn't have to be the senpai) while shuu is watching, there's no turning back.
Some of you think the same?

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I love a happy ending

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