Revised translation by Otokonoko (tentative).

Take your time reading and enjoy.

What now , he let it spiraled outta Control, he had till the train car chapter to stop this but now.....
this is turning out to be Dark , did his wife truly ,truly ,truly moved on with this Man ,I don't know he just seemed Too perfect....this might go dark

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I'm calling it now, Haruka is going to get rekt for being such a bitch, and sempai still being a salty again about all this.

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http://viid.me/9MrdF

Please make it happen

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No idea where this is going I don't feel anything from it I just wanna finish it.

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He probably just stabbed himself.

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This has got to be the first time I've ever actually felt something emotional from NTR. Don't get me wrong, I'm still fapping.

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A small very very VERY small part of me is hoping that Shu will some how turn this around in the end; the sole reason is cause i really cant stand the Senpai and his cocky ass looks and shit. However knowing how pathetic Shu is, he'll probably have the most pathetic end to this situation.

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I really hope Shu gets his shit together. I was kind of rooting for the senpai at first, but now I just feel really bad for Shu. He brought this unto himself, but man this situation is just a real downer. He was going to go tell his wife how much he loved her and maybe he was gonna change, but then he gets greeted with divorce papers.

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This shit is getting good. When is the next issue comimg out I have to know. The curse will begin to take effect now. I bet senpai will start getting ed soon after this and no doubt people will start talking behind harukas back and giving her glares of disgust after this is all said and done. Japan pretty big on that I believe especially now that shu probably stabbed himself or committed suicide. A couple stabs to the gut should be enough for a guy like him.

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You know, usually you just see people saying "This is fucking hot!" or something similar for most NTR stories. Not so much for this one. Those people actually appear to be affected by this story.

Maybe this one, in particular, hits a bit close to home?

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Hmm this version makes shuu more miserable or rather situation is more miserable, dem feels.

@xshadowsunx, not even barry white could help here, unless haruka is faking everything, by everything i mean what has been said in this chapter and what she has done in order to break shuu even more to the point where he will snap and do something wrong or.... i dont know :p harukas actions as of now are that of a typical ntr heroine where they became crazed about cock, any cock, and because of that i can't see happy ending for this story even though i really want it to happen.

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good lord, I don't even wanna read the rest of this... how the hell does someone get to this point?

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when is chapter 20 coming and does someone know a similair manga?

when is chapter 20 coming and does someone know a similair manga as this one?

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Let me share some of my thoughts regarding the situation. It may look very bleak for Shu, but there's still hope for him. Not so much for Haruka, though.

Netoraserare will run for around 8 chapters after this. Shu hit his absolute low point here, it's almost impossible to break him further, and definitely not for 8 chapters.
On top of that, he has several tools in his hands to make Haruka miserable if he wants to and be happy himself:

-Kawai is in love with him. She has shown more love and compassion towards Shu in this chapter than Haruka did in the entire series. She even said "I love you", which is something that Haruka never did. All Shu got after confessing his love to Haruka was a "Thank you" or "I'm happy" after he proposed to her. Kawai can help him heal from this trauma and give him security. She was introduced in one of the first chapters and even got color pages at the beginning of volume 3, so she will definitely play a vital role from here on out.

-Haruka has no job, friends or money of her own. Once Senpai dumps her, she's helpless. She always relied on Shu for her entire life and that will bite her in the ass.

-Shu can leak the sex tapes of Haruka and Senpai to humiliate her, especially sending them to their parents. They will reject and despise her for what she did.

-Eventually, he can reverse the roles and let Haruka watch him and Kawai have sex without ED. I always assumed that was a problem caused from his inferiority complex because of Haruka and Senpai dating in High School and keeping him in the dark about it. The doctor in chapter 2 said he's actually fine in the physical department after all, so he shouldn't have that many problems having sex with other girls than Haruka. I want to see the funny faces she will make then.

In contrast, what does Haruka have?
-Senpai's big gigolo dick. That's it.
And he will dump her on the spot once he gets cucked by random dudes since she's addicted to sex now. She doesn't care who will fuck her, she just wants to feel pleasure.

I definitely think that it will be Haruka that gets NTR' ed in the end. Not because of the power of blackmail, rape or big dicks, but because of the love that Kawai can give to Shu. Something that she was never able to do.

Essentially, the story would split in two from here on out: One side is Shu healing and hooking up with Kawai, realizing how much more she loves him than Haruka ever did, the other one is Haruka having empty sex with Senpai and other dudes, slowly realizing what a whore she became. She will try to get back to Shu, but it will be too late for her, like the chapter name implies.

In the end, Haruka may become a prostitute, while Shu marries Kawai.

Also, I'll share two strawpolls for Shu and Haruka here.

Shu:
http://www.rqq.co/BhvXx

Haruka:
http://viid.me/9MeBg

Last edited on 17 August 2015, 05:04 UTC.

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Guys i'm telling you now. Kill all hope for this story and do not invest your emotions in it or else you will be rekt for weeks when the ending is not what you want. You will be limp for a few days afterwards also.

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@Vivi1993, I think your assumption that it's impossible to break Shu further is wrong, even for 8 chapters. Here's one way:

1. Build the relationship between Shu and Kawai further.
2. NTR Shu a second time through Kawai (e.g. Senpai fucks her too, maybe even gets a threesome from Kawai and Haruka).

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@backpr Kawai doesn't feel anything for Senpai and has no relation to him, unlike Haruka. And unlike Haruka, she genuinely loves Shu and even said "I would never absolutely make you feel like that", especially not with the douchebag his wife already had an affair with.

Remember what Haruka said about having an affair? "You shouldn't be mad about that." Kawai is the total opposite in that regard.

Last edited on 17 August 2015, 12:20 UTC.

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Translator messed up again and it was a big one. He's gotta post the edited pages.

That Kawai isn't the only one who thinks it's "disgusting".
What happens is that Kawai tells Shu that she would never sleep with another man if he asked her. Shu realizes that she is not an option because of this, that his wife is all he has.

A literal translation is "That's why there is noone for me but my wife".

>She's not taking about Shuu stopping it.
She is talking about Shu not stopping it. This is the only possible interpretation because it's 私を, not 私が (you never get angry AT ME, you never try to stop ME). She is upset because she is trying to goad some sort of reaction from him as proof that he loves her, but he always remains passive.

>I believe senpai is really saying whatever love she had for Shuu, not the other way around, is gone/nonexistent/dead.
It has to be Shu's love for Haruka, because it says 春ちゃんへの愛. Notice the へ, the love TOWARDS Haru-chan.

In the previous page Haruka was upset because nothing in Shu's actions indicated to her that he loved her. Shu just stares and doesn't say anything in response. Senpai then tries to reinforce this, "see, I told you, he has no love for you".

>the way the line was written didn't specify anyone as the source of Haruka's unhappiness.
It says お前は春ちゃんを. Notice the を, omae (Shu) is specified as making Haruchan miserable.

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Yes, I embarrassing missed some stuff. I have someone else looking over the translation to fix the errors. As soon as that's done I'll update the pages here.

-Otokonoko

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@Vivi1993 Fair points. However I still think it might be doable in the longer term.

> And unlike Haruka, she genuinely loves Shu and even said "I would never absolutely make you feel like that"

Exactly. At a time when Shu knew that his wife it worthless compared to Kawai who he might see as pure, Kawai doing something like that would break Shu even further. I think this is a possibility since Kawai seems so naive, the type that can be easily manipulated and mindbroken in the hentai world. Senpai seems to be the traditional predator type.

Well, I'm speculating. I'd personally want it to go your way, it would be refreshing.

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this story is like horriblesubs - so bad yet so good.
I feel so sorry for both of them, really

Last edited on 18 August 2015, 23:04 UTC.

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@Otokono

hi^^ ,

There is chap 19 V3 will out nextly?

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@playmobil and everyone else:

Waiting to hear back from my partner-in-crime.

I sent him a "final" version to go over before I re-upload it; I'm hoping he gets back to me soon.

I think it's ready to go as-is but I want to ensure that there's no more hiccups with this chapter.

It's gonna change some dialogue back to how I originally translated it more or less but it'll sound more "natural" for ENG speakers.
Also with the context of the chapter cleared-up it's gonna effect the translation quite a bit. (For the "better" I hope.)

If Sands is IMA before the end of today (central time) I'll go ahead and post the V3 update.
(I'm sure he's busy and I already have the corrections placed as suggested; just requesting his pair of eyes to review V3 before it's uleashed.)

Thank you for putting up with me.

-GGXXRE
(Formerly "Otokonoko".)

Okay guys, V3 is up! Enjoy.

Last edited on 22 August 2015, 19:26 UTC.

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This is pure comedy gold.

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Don't mind me. I'm just here for the comments.

Good to know that there are so many sound of reason among us when we discuss a hentai plot. I'd like to brofist many of you awesome people.

IMO, this kind of story makes people contemplating their life choices. For that I'd like to congratulate the artist. Though the arc may still incomplete, certainly the message is delivered.

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Regarding breaking shu even further, those who said that it's possible by using kawai and that she is the type that could fall easily for senpai and his big dick because reasons, are spot on and exactly what i had in mind the chances for that are pretty high. At this point manga could stray even further into dark and show shuu trying to commit suicide and either it failed because again reasons or you know what. Honestly whenever i see update for this manga and even when not i'm always thinking something along the lines: "I really wonder how it will progress this/next time".

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well I just want to make notice, that in the two first panels at the 14th page, is obvious that she LOVE when shuu is watching, so, even if shuu and haruka stays together, haruka already changed, she likes to get drill for other men's penis (it think it doesn't have to be the senpai) while shuu is watching, there's no turning back.
Some of you think the same?

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I love a happy ending

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When does volume 3 start?

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@mondo2000 This chapter is the start of volume 3, thus the color pages at the beginning.

Another thing I noticed in the story:
At each start of a volume came a drastic change.
In volume 1 we went from a "normal" marriage to the cuckolding, at the start of volume 2 it changed from cuckolding to Haruka cheating and the Senpai BS, and we already got heavy hints how the situation will change in volume 3. Hint: It has something to do with Kawai. She didn't get color pages and this important dialogue for nothing.

I'll point out her character with the pages in this chapter.

Page 1: Here's the love confession that Haruka never made in the entire story. I guess Kawai said that before Haruka ever had the chance in her entire life spent with Shu. Damn, Haruka wasn't fast enough.

Page 2: Kawai notices Shu's pain and is concerned about him, Haruka either is retarded as fuck or she enjoys his suffering.

Page 3: Kawai would never cheat on Shu or make him suffer, Haruka got off to the idea and even said that you shouldn't be mad about your partner having an affair.

Page 4: Something else that is different between the two girls: Instead of blaming Shu for not getting erect, Kawai blames herself.
Maybe she also has a few insecurity problems. She can remedy them together with Shu in the near future.

Page 5: Kawai is opposed to the idea of cuckolding and would never agree to do that. That's what makes Shu realize that his fetish is really disgusting and he should have never started it in the first place.
I think Kawai as his wife would have a proper conversation with him about it instead of just going along with it. On the other hand, Shu would have never developed his inferiority complex and fetish if the girl he loved was honest with him and didn't keep secrets. You know, someone like Kawai.
Overall, Kawai showed to have a way better and compassionate personality than Haruka in a mere dozen pages (including the ones she got in volume 1 and 2).
Haruka had more than 200 pages to show us her character and we still barely know anything about her except for her wish of a baby.

A little info about chapter 20: It's a complete twist in Shu's favor. Senpai got BTFO for good. Surprisingly not by Shu, but by Haruka. Reverse NTR with Kawai in the future is pretty much the only route the story can go from here.

Look at the /h/ threads on 4chan for details.

Last edited on 26 August 2015, 02:42 UTC.

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This story reminds me of the Japanese movie Moonlight Whispers ( https://www.fapoff.com/BhvGZ ). It seems like first that Shu did not understand his sexual fetish. He thought it was just about seeing his wife have sex with other men. What really got him off is the humiliation and pain he suffers from Haruka.

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Espero que el sempai le da una buena golpiza al enfermo del marido

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If anyone already have chapter 20, please post here pic from the last page.

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Spoil: http://viid.me/9Mwby
thk ggxxre

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HAPPY ENDING , PLEASE . I HOPE FOR IT !!!!

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@masterfap999 Don't worry, Senpai got BTFO and crushed in chapter 20 and will never return. Now it's time for reverse NTR with Kawai. I think Haruka will suffer the most from now on.

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@Vivi1993 What does "BTFO" mean ???

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@masterfap999

BTFO ---> http://www.rqq.co/BhvZT

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Someone knows when the ch 20 coming?

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Yo that 4chan link tho lmfao! take some time and read it's fucking hilarious.

Edit: since the 4chan link doesn't work no more https://ouo.io/3kglX2

Last edited on 07 September 2015, 05:24 UTC.

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Chap 20 please!!!!!

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hmmm por lo que se ve de los spoilers de 4chan parece que acaban juntos u.u. bueno eso puedo entender xDD aun asi quiero el cap 201!!!! asdasdfasfaf

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