the real size is to big imposible for me to upload=_=

What? Why? How?

I get, yeah, mummification fetish. But uh, context? Please?

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Kinda agree. Art is well done. But no background story, or anything. Seems rather .... disjointed.

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soooooo.... what just happend? .. in any way? i have no clue what so ever is their more to this?

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I don't understand porn anymore.

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The follies of no text.
Generally speaking, in such "brain washing" genres, the reader doesn't need to know Why those character suffer such treatment, but it is necessary to understand What is happening to them, and what is going to. Part 'o teh sexz is about arousing expectations as well, no?

This is in particular sad, seeing as the author put in the effort of building up an exposition with no porn, but...There's no exposition to be found.
It would probably be better off for the author to just draw the fetishistic segments right away, if one's not going to actually develop any sort of story. <:

P.S: It says "incomplete", so I presume this is the ordinary hit-and-miss first chapter, which generally doesn't work at all -- but it at least serves as a device for buildup.
Still, even if the 2nd chapter is enjoyable thanks to this 27 pages of baffling chain of events, it could'd been planned better.
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