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(C84) [Namiroji (Shiina Nami)] Haisetsu Shoujo Soushuuhen Ch. 1 [English] [anidra]

(C84) [波路地 (椎名波)] 排泄少女 総集編 第1話 [英訳]

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anidra   PM
Posted:2015-02-03 09:41
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Posted on 03 February 2015, 10:29 by:   anidra     PM
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Translated by anidra
Posted on 03 February 2015, 18:42 by:   yogang     PM
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Posted on 03 February 2015, 19:28 by:   Darkman9000     PM
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I would say you should try working on the alignment of your text. Sometimes, the words squish together in some word bubbles, and others have things like the names being broken up to fit them. This just makes things a little difficult to read at times. Beyond that, the English isn't too bad, but certainly may prove difficult to tolerate by others.

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