don't expect any good rating - such things are not valued here.
your problems are:
1) style is too specific
2) too few patterns - in manga pictures are placed more chaotic, not table-style.
3) no backgrounds
4) most pics - just faces, no furnishing, no figures
5) very few foreshortenings

Base +7, psaw +6, horujik +6, gabry88e +6, Sophisa +3, jordanvad +6, xxard +8, kiwirori +6, Euphory +10, silence929 +5, Seiphied +6, Shinryu-Rex +5, White Joker +16, and 5 more...

i hate to see any artist discouraged but this isn't the best place when the base skill is still a wip

Base +4, gabry88e +6, isnotjustapervert +6, Sophisa +3, Shinryu-Rex +5, White Joker +16, Necronomicron +7, The_Unnamed +7, MapHawk +6, Runedude +6

well...what can i say?

Base +6, Sophisa +3, Shinryu-Rex +5, Runedude +6

This is still a draft, as I plan to fix it good one day. Also realise, this is all done on my little 3DS screen, that is why doing backgrounds and body panels is very limited for me. I planto change or add more panels in the future.
Mirage

Base +2, Sophisa -3, arghlblargh +5, Shinryu-Rex -5, Jesen +7, The_Unnamed -7, isnotjustapervert -6, Necronomicron -7, MapHawk +6, psaw -6, Runedude +6

This particular artist throws a huge whine fest/self-pity party at another website he hosts these at, anytime someone offers even constructive criticism. Going so far as to ask the moderators there to silence his critics. Apparently folks telling him that he needs to improve his anatomy, and attempt different perspectives is too much for him. If said site wasn't so starved for new content, they'd probably tell him to take his crap elsewhere. I'm honestly surprised he hasn't flipped the fuck out here, considering the tepid response he's getting here. But all of his comics are the same melodramatic, poorly-written shit in a different ugly wrapper.

Base +7, gabry88e +6, Sophisa +3, arghlblargh -5, Jesen -7, Necronomicron +7, The_Unnamed +7, Slants +6, MapHawk +6, psaw +6, Runedude +6

Oh, look, one of the trolls from the other site that the admins told them to shut the fuck up and stop spamming the other site.

vrba79, get's angry at me, as his little friends, because I get lots of more views, than him and such. But vrba79 just proved that how my art and stories do get reconaise on the net, as being unique. Out of thousands of comics posted here, he found this story and knew immediately who I was. Thank you!

Like I told everyone at the other site, If you can do better than me, do it! Nothing is stopping you. I also encourage people to always post their stories and art, as I am always happy seeing other's people works.

Mirage

Last edited on 09 January 2015, 18:15 UTC.

Base +2, Sophisa -3, arghlblargh +5, gabry88e -6, Shinryu-Rex -5, Jesen +7, The_Unnamed -7, Necronomicron -7, MapHawk -6, psaw -6, Runedude +6

Actually, here's a good cross section of people critiquing you, you being a whiny little bitch, and then the admin calling you out on being the main antagonist.
You were even lashing out at the people who were going in-depth to explain how you could improve. That's not the calling card of an artist, that's a drama queen.
http://gplinks.co/0GC44

Base +7, ThunderKurono +7, Sophisa +3, arghlblargh -5, gabry88e +6, Shinryu-Rex +5, Jesen -7, The_Unnamed +7, isnotjustapervert +6, Necronomicron +7, psaw +6, Runedude +6

vrba79, you are not even worth it. And those peoples (same as always... same old trolls as before), are the few that bitches all the time against me. Should I post also that I am the one who get some of the most views in the entire site too? Show that I also get thousands of views, every time I post a comic or story there, unlike you. Lots of other people actually do enjoy my art and stories, and that simply kills you and the trolls.

Like I said at the other site, if you don't like my stuff, simply move on and let the one who enjoys it, enjoy it.

If you can't do that, go seek some mental help. It's just a comic...

Mirage

Last edited on 10 January 2015, 01:33 UTC.

Base +2, Sophisa -3, arghlblargh +5, gabry88e -6, Shinryu-Rex -5, Jesen +7, The_Unnamed -7, Necronomicron -7, i8246i -6, psaw -6, Runedude +6

Define "lots".

Base +7, Sophisa +3, arghlblargh -5, gabry88e +6, Shinryu-Rex +5, White Joker -16, Necronomicron +7, Runedude +6

Comics are visual. Use less text. Don't tell us when you can show us.

Base +5, gabry88e +6, Sophisa +3, Shinryu-Rex +5, White Joker +16, Necronomicron +7, The_Unnamed +7, Slants +6, MapHawk +6, Runedude +6

Have you considered putting all the text onto single dedicated panes and all the art onto their own pages? There's a lot of close up shots at faces and some of mouths talking which the energy and time could have been concentrated some other more rewarding place.

Base +7, Shinryu-Rex +5, gabry88e +6, Necronomicron +7, Sophisa +3, Runedude +6

I will add more body shots for sure, in the future, when I'll fix it (it's still in draft). I will also add more panels and pages, with very little text. Thank you for all the input, everyone. This comic is slowly reaching it's end. I'll try to keep it under 100 pages.

Base +2, Shinryu-Rex -5, Jesen +7, The_Unnamed -7, arghlblargh +5, gabry88e -6, moyashiM@STER -5, Necronomicron -7, psaw -6, Sophisa -3, Runedude +6

Story is touching art keep at it man don't let others discourage you. I know myself i cant draw worth a damn but i do see alot of potential for this. Just keep going man you'll do great if you keep working at it.

Base +6, Runedude +6, gabry88e -6, psaw -6, Sophisa -3